Reviews for Beautiful Evening |
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Enforcer209 chapter 5 . 12/3/2018 Very well done on this story I enjoyed it immensely. I think this is the first Naruto fanfic that I’ve read that actually has a Hyuga clan civil war all the others usually just gloss over it or the divide between the families branches isn’t so bad to get to a branch family revolt. Like I said before very enjoyable story |
LordHatredX chapter 5 . 3/27/2014 very nice short story ! ! ! ! |
danielpaul chapter 5 . 10/21/2013 Wonderful ending to a great story. Thanks for writing. |
danielpaul chapter 4 . 10/21/2013 Great depiction of Naruto and Hinata here during the dinner and proposal. Naruto got REAL serious with Hiashi...about time! |
danielpaul chapter 3 . 10/20/2013 This was a total package of a wonderful chapter. You moved it through a variety of settings and situations and then ended up with Naruto and Hinata together again for the night. Sooo sweet and romantic...this guy loves the type of romance you are writing here. |
danielpaul chapter 2 . 10/20/2013 This was a sweet...sweet chapter. Again, superb writing with just a great depiction of Naruto and Hinata. I just hope something of this type could be shown in the manga for a time before the Naruto manga ends. Sooooo good:) |
danielpaul chapter 1 . 10/20/2013 This was a cool and romantic confession...it was done in a way that I have not seen before. Your first chapter is well written and beautiful in content and the sequence that you had events take place. Super ending! |
Guest chapter 5 . 3/11/2013 I like it! |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/11/2013 That's probably how long it's gonna take naruto to get a clue alreay |
hiNAru Aburame chapter 5 . 12/23/2010 Hi! I love it *.*! so much!. Greetings and till the next fic. n_n |
dragonball256 chapter 1 . 8/26/2010 Great story so far, glad to see some naruhina :D |
UnseatedShinigami chapter 5 . 4/21/2010 -Gives author a round of applause- Great story. It's about time someone did a story like this in which the relationship of Naruto and Hinata is taken to the inevitable conclusion, with sufficient references to both of their futures as Head of the Hyuuga and Hokage. The characters maintained the proper perspective while allowing appropriate change over time and the story was almost exactly what any NaruHina fan expects for their future. Well done. |
Demon Of Sacrifice chapter 5 . 5/19/2009 nice |
ShadowligerV chapter 5 . 5/8/2009 You know I can see the Hyuuga Clan inplode that way lets just hope like in your story that Naruto does get Hinata out before that happens. |
hinaxnaru chapter 5 . 12/29/2008 so cute i loved it |