wow amazing chapter, simply amazing. I cried my heart out toward the end of chapter 3, RIP sxr.

I might leave a nicer review when I actually finish, but just in case no one has pointed it out yet, you're using the word "prone" wrong.

Prone means laid out flat, usually on your belly. You can't stand and be prone at the same time, they're functional opposites.

I'm sorry for the harsh tone, but it's bothering me enough that I stopped reading in order to write this. That is extremely rare for me. If I'm lucky, I won't run into that word again following your opening description of Rei.

I was enjoying this story so much, too. :(

I really enjoyed this story.

Very good story.

Thank the creator that there are still original Evangelion stories.

Like the last of your stories I read, this one delivers an interesting twist once again.

It was a rather dark story, even though the nnding was a positive one. I don't really like dark fiction and I wouldn't really your that.

And you added an original character, that was acceptable (she even was as disturbed as the original gang:-)), for once not just another Mary Sue.

well i have to say i'm still standing and claping, great story love it from begining to end and a great way to and my day thanks because is hard to find good after you read as may as i have (but i can't actually write a good one of my own) is good to see that if look back a little that's where you the best

i don't think your going to read this anymore but i have to admit this is how an eva fanfic should be writen (have you read some of the new ones god!)well anyway i'm really enjoing the i can't wait to see how you ended it

take care and have a nice day

Great story, Rei dieing twice made me cry :

It was even worse because Rei is my favorite character.

Anyway, you did a good job, and I congratulate you for it.

very nice

Man this fic owned, it was soo cool with the awesome idea for buffed up plugsuits. i thought it was awesome how you integrated a little bit of romance, and awesome action in this fic, good job.

I normally dislike continuation fics, mostly because they seem like so much wishful thinking. I have to admit, however, that I find that I like the concept of Ikari Gendo managing to cling to life in some vaguely Darth-Vaderesque manner - the bastard is just too evil to die. I also like how you handled the two times Rei died in this one: the scene in the hospital is reminiscent of the scene and song in the Les Miserables musical where Eponine dies (can't remember the song's title), and Rei's last lines the second time around again echo Vader very much. I'm more an Asuka fan than a Rei fan - I have to admit that Rei really disturbs me - but I like the way you've built on what I see as her essentially tragic nature. If I hadn't just recently watched a SaiKano marathon I might have shed tears over the way you killed her, but I found the pathos very touching. I've checked out some of your other work and so far I like what I've read. Your style with pacing seems a little fast to me, but I think that's more of a general preference, and seems to work well enough in your fics.

Really incredible. You've mixed some original ideas with the same dose of action found in Evangelion. I couldn't help but notice that you left out Naomi's tombstone at the end, though. Hope to see more great writing from you!

Fantastic story. Really enjoyed it. I'm home sick from work today and I really liked it. Flowed really well and it was a perfect blend. Great job.

I can only describe it as... good. But let me explain. This is from a reader who is at sick at home from school, who's done nothing but read Fanfiction since he got sick. Although I prefere WAFF and Romance, this was a curiously nice blend of NGE, sci-fi, and drama. Kudos on the good work.

Thank you. I like this ending a lot. A better feeling of closure. The original sucked!

awesome story