hey there the story is really good so far even though I'm only halfway through I can't believe I never found this one before I've been reading BSG fanfiction for 10 years. Ever think about more Battlestar, maybe crossover with The Expanse?

OMG, jonharper, please re post this under SAAB and BSG2003 crossovers, I never would have found it in the old xovers cesspool.

Wow!
Great story..

Good story
But sad ending, killing not only Laura but the two title ships as well.

Though there are a fair number of grammatical errors, this easily makes my top 5 BSG list. character annoyances were kept to a minimum. Well done.

Awesome story, loved reading it.

Great action scenes, I'm a fan of both tv shows and you captured them and their characters well.

Sad ending, with the loss of Galactica and President Laura Roslin, but I'm hopeful for the survival of humanity.

Great twist with the Chig becoming involved. I cannot see them allying with the Cylons though, I think the Cylons would see them as "flawed" too and unworthy of surviving in their Cylon God's universe.

I liked this story overall. The one thing I would change is in this chapter. You've got tanks blowing through centurions like some War of the Worlds Thunderchilde action here, but I have trouble believing that the centurions had never encountered armored vehicles, specifically colonial armored vehicles.
At one point in this story before this chapter, you have Starbuck say to one of the Wildcards that they were "Sorry" they left all of their heavy equipment, including "armored vehicles," when they fled the colonies.

But even if that weren't there, yes I get that, due to the 12 colonies being on separate worlds, the only fighting the 12 colonies would have done against each other would be space battles (as compared to Earth, where we have developed a mastery of land war), but wouldn't the Colonials at least have had those armored vehicles that every big city SWAT team has?

amazing story so far , i hope you can continue and update soon

Um, Centurions aren't all that good of soldiers. Sure they're robots...
But they still use cannons IN SPACE, and have to get within a few hundred meters to fire. And apparently, they have no tanks...
[Large armored vehicle runs over a group of Centurions, then blows up a bunker]

Great Story!

Great story! Loved it! thanks!

My fuckinh god Balter is a genius and yet is still going to betray his race! Why can't he see that the cylon is just using him.

beautifull story,very good, now with the help of the colonials earth will start to build battlestars, more powerfull Cruisers , Battlecruisers,Battleships,Destroyers. And it woul be good to develop shields to better protect the warships.

good story.

Great story so far. I could never understand why Adama would put up with civilian politics or a disruptive press when there were only 50000 or so people left.

Sanity dictates giving them jobs in food service or waste reclamation.

The instant that Zarek had to think about his political career when told that the act he contemplates was a direct danger should have been the instant that he took a round through the forehead. That 'Quorum' should know that they can vote as they will, but the military controls their air ration.