| Reviews for Of Something New |
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   Nightshade's sydneylover150 chapter 4 . 5/6/2011 Interesting. I hope one day you continue this. I'd love to know if Sev and Harry are actually related or not. I'd also love to know why exactly they were fighting each other. Can Sev turn back into his human form like Harry did? Will Harry retake the form of a younger Severus again? The only concern I have is that it is hard to tell when you are switching between povs. Adding lines where the povs switch would help a great deal. I hope to see more in the future. |
| one blue sparrow chapter 1 . 2/24/2011 "Pet Peeves: my own bad spelling, abandoned fics, and Sirius." Your words not mine. Please don't let this story be abandoned! |
| fangirl-friend2 chapter 4 . 1/8/2011 I dont understand why you havent updated, even if only to tell the readers that you WONT be continuing the story. It was a good story and im sad to see it lost. Hope you havent died or something equLLY BAD... |
| Fireboltpatronus21818 chapter 4 . 4/25/2007 good:D |
| Kayla Summers chapter 4 . 3/8/2007 Interresting...Update I can't wait to see what will happen! |
| snowspell chapter 4 . 10/15/2006 Oh My GOD! Please write more! Please, please, please! This is the BEST Severitus story EVER! I won't sleep if you don't write more! Also if you are still looking for a beta I'd be happy to do so. :-) |
| allwaysandforever chapter 4 . 10/14/2006 Come on...you have to write more! I love this so much! Harry sounded so CUTE in the scene where Sev attacked him! Write more soon LOL |
| luvbooks chapter 4 . 9/13/2006 cool story pleasepleaseplease write more soon |
| Mia chapter 4 . 7/20/2006 hey! r story is great...really! i love it! so how is severus going to react tó the news? |
| Zeera chapter 4 . 6/14/2006 This story is great! please update soon! |
| sunsethill chapter 4 . 3/29/2006 Whoa! Strange, but interesting. Do you update more frequently than twice a year? I would really like to know where you are going with this. |
| Erik Thomas Stephans chapter 4 . 3/21/2006 Interesting, interesting.I have never read something quite like this before. Especially a Severitus Challenge fiction. I do hope that you continue soon. And your spellings and things are a lot better than some that I've incountered. Keep up the good work. Angelis |
| Kateri1 chapter 4 . 3/19/2006 Great chapter, lots of exciting things going on, can't wait for the next one |
| skan chapter 4 . 3/4/2006 hey, scene seperations!now all you need is a beta reader. |
| Skan chapter 3 . 3/4/2006 I like the story so far but there are a few things you could do to make it easier to read. I would suggest a beta reader (for grammer and spelling) and some sort of separation between different scenes (a line of astrixes {*} for exaple). |
