Good fic. A couple of typos and missed words but a very nice piece of work

What? The end? Aww! But how is that an end? What happened after? You should write a sequal to cover that (even a one, two or three shot would be nice)

Anyway, I love this story!

I really like this story. I'm so sad beacuse Alice is dead. It's very well written. Please update!

I'm enjoying it so far. And I'm looking forward to seeing what's gonna happen.

I think you could slow down a bit some places though. Describe things more, and don't rush through it. At times it's more like a summary.

Other then that I'm liking it!:D