Um, this was... I fount this fic really creepy, menacing and scary... but, oddly enough, really good and enticing and utterly magnificent! I know it's been years, and the likelihood of you paying attention to my review is slim, but I wanna ask for an update... please? I think you've created something dark yet incredible and I wanna read more! Though, I'm a bit freaked out that Seto is planning on killing Yami somewhere down the line... I wonder if he'll really be able to? Or will Yami really let him? Why has Yami forgotten his memories? Who is he? Why are people after Kaiba? Are Yami and Seto gonna end up in a relationship? Are they gonna fall in love? Will they even recognize what they're feeling as love if they do? Together they seem almost unstoppable! I would gladly, eagerly, read more... if you'd only have enough mercy to update! Pretty chocolate sundae ice cream, please?

AWESOME! FUCKIN AWESOME! I love this fic, lo ve it, lo ve so much it hurts! Please... continue it. Is one of the most beatiful fanfics Ive ever read, and Im telling you that im not a very easy persona to say things like this! But is awesomw! But only I had some questions:

1. Its gonna be a Yami xSeto right, rght? please , say yes. I love this couple so much.

2. Seto;s gonna kill Yami?

3. You are going to put lemmon on the fic.? Pleas, say yes to that one, jejeje.

and the final question: Did Yami get hurt in some chapter?

Please... I dont wnat him to be hurted,(weel, maybe a gunshot or a stab, but please no rape, no sodomy and that kind of things, I dont like to see him suffer like that, jeje0

Thanks a lot and please, conti. Its beatiful and you are a beatiful writter.

m I like it...please update soon and don't worry you did it justice

love it and please update

Damn. This is one hell of a fascinating story, and written boldly, as a badass assassin tale ought to be. I love it and look forward to reading more (soon?). Fantastic work, really.

hey i love this story! i hope ur continuing with it since its been a while since u updated. O and i think ur descriptios are done very well.

PLEASE CONTINUE!

Hmm after you are finished I am going to check out Noir... sounds interesting enough

Sad how things kinda came full circle in this chapter... with Rosalyn and such...worse still is they never know, but I doubt they would care because well... they're assasins and they cant care...

update when you can

the *Queen Of Games*

aan update...sorry for the late reaction

wow. it's actually been updated! OO; I never thought I'd see the day.

really liked update. xD picturing seto and yami speeding away from tanks made me laugh. xD and yami's reaction to the beach was too cute. - I feel bad for the girl though ;-;

update soon!

...or, sometime...ever.

Nice chapter. It was good to see a little bit of develoment in Seto and Yami's relationship. I'm very interested to see where this story is actually going.

/Very/ nice. [I'm sorry, but I'm experiencing a sad lack of adjectives today. What can you do?] A Noir-based YGO fic. *cheers* I remember Noir. In fact, now that I've read this, I'm beginning to see more and more the similarities between Mireille Bouquet and Seto - both have blue eyes, an icy, loner demeanor...and sexy. xp Unfortunately, Yami's nature was entirely changed [I suppose with Kirika Yuumura's amnesia, it couldn't be helped].

Actually, I think the description was wonderful. You /always/ do a wonderful job with description. Actually, with the fic in general. Though already having seen Noir [well, at least the episodes you've based the chapters off so far], /The Chosen/ isn't boring at all. I'm finally gaining insight on the complexity of the story I never picked up before [I know, I know, but I'm horrible at analysis] - though with a slightly different twist. Kaiba and Yami are my preference anyways.

As for the actual Noir series, one scene in particular stands out in my mind that I'd love to see in writing: it takes place in the construction site, but perhaps you can insert it somewhere anyways? It's where a suit attacks Kirika, intending to shoot, but she uses her weight to bring him to the floor, somehow managing to get her tie around his neck in the meantime. Then, she jumps off the edge of the window, her drop arrested by - well, you know. [*crack*] It was so cool. Eh heh, I talk too much. Well, great work [lack of adjectives, remember?], and please update soon!

Hi Lomelindi!

WOW- this was a really good chapter, despite what you think. I liked all the action parts, and the little plot twists here and there. Making Hammond seem like a good guy was certainly a nice twist. I also like how Seto and Yami are already used to each other's little odd quirks.

So, when are we going to find out about Yami's mysterious past?

Fantastic chapter, as always!

Really really good chapter. I loved Seto in this. And Yami sure isn't the most talkative in this with his two or so sentences. The bit with making Hamming a sort of good guy was great. Although I'm curious to know what he and the other two did to deserve to be killed.

Wonderful thrilling story, I love it ! - You never disappoint me, dear ! _~ This fic is really good (I know Noir a little, I like the way you inspired yourself from it ! ), I see you haven't lost your talented touch ! Can't wait for more !

Keep up your master work and make sure to update soon !