This gets a massive dose of aaaaaaaw! I love it, I really do :)

Oh well done! Very lovely and in character. Great job.

This was really good! Is there more? It doesn't say complete but you haven't updated for nearly seven years!

Oh I just adored this lovely jewel :)

That was so cute.

I LOVED that! Very well written, your usual excellent characterisation- how do you write River so well? Anyone can (and many do) write gibberish and say it as from her mouth but you can write her sane and as a girl as well.

Loved it anyway! Please write more!

Oh wow, I loved this story. It rocked. Great dialogue, characterization, wrting and plot, all brilliant. Love the Mal/River interaction and the River/Girls stuff. Would LOVE a sequel, dying to hear about River flirting with Wash:) Awesome job with the humour as well, love how Jayne mispronounces/conjoins the words seperation and segregation, too funny. Reads like an episode, excellent work!

I enjoyed the first part of this story a lot. Interesting concept, everyone in character...it was very nice. But mid-way through the format went a little odd. Sentences were broken up in the middle...It just made it distracting to read. I understand that format issues are not always your fault (silly but I just thought you might like to know.

Ah! I loved this! I love anything where there's any kind of good tension between Mal and River. I hope to read or find more of your work or elsewhere.

That was... shiny. I loved it. I'd love to see River flirt with Shepherd Book!

"It explains why I have me a sexy, exciting, dangerous woman . . . and you have a gun collection." Yes! That's the Hoban Washburn I know and love. Great job. You stayed very true to the characters and the dialouge. *applause* Not to mention I found the subject ammusing.

Loved it.

~Carrie

Please more, I would love to see River practicing with Wash and the preacher, and what happens when she gets to Jayne

Wrenn

I love all of your stories, this one especially. I can't wait to see what you come up with next!

that was lovely. you really got the characters down in that, they were perfect, i could just imagine them doing this, it was great so thanks for sharing :op

Very good. Excellent characterisation, good tale.