PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! I know it's been years! But I love this story, I loved it from when I first read The Burn so so many years ago and I have just came back to FanFiction and refound my old favourites.
You are an amazing writer and if you aren't able to update I guess it's back to chapter 1 of the burn for me because I'd happily re read it all again. It's just that damn good!

Please please please update

So I've spent this week reading the complete story of "The Burn" and now I'm up to date with this story yet all I can say is DAMN! The massive amount of shit that hits the fan in this story is God this poor girl has been going through hell, which is ironic considering who her father is. So yeah, this whole Chris thing? Every time he comes near her I want to break his fingers. He's in the friend category and he best to do well and stay there. As for Jeff as much as I love the little bugger he better keep his hands to himself. He was a great friend for offering to let her move in but any perverted idea that my be running through that little enigmatic head of his better not come to light or else someone might lose a toe...and some shoe laces. He fits the role as "brother" and BEST FUCKING FRIEND! (sorry for my anger some people have royally pissed my of today) Lastly is Orton, I'm still pissed at the little ass monkey. How DARE he cheat?! Is he crazy? Jess is so full of life and adventure. I mean I get the whole "I'm lonely" thing it gets to the best of us but hot damn, she was pregnant! I was sooo looking forward to having the littlest Orton running around :'(. Is it wrong that after all the shit he put her through that I want them to fix their marriage? I know it'll cause a truck load of drama but the way you describe their love for each other I can't help but want them to make it through the storm. My ex and I have had a million and one fights and broke up like 3 times but some how we keep finding each other...no matter how far I move...huh you think he's stalking me? Anyway great story It's hilarious yet gut wrenching PLEASE update when ever possible.

Toddles *Clare*

*Dances with happiness* whoop whoop! This chapter rocked my custom Kane socks, girl! And uhoh I smell trouble with daddy Kane! Update soon!

haphazardbymikey: see I told you she would update soon!

Another great chapter! Please keep updating this is my favorite!

I wonder if he will rat her out to Glenn hmm? Well I wonder what this breakfast will entail, and hopefully Glenn will be back soon. Great update

poor jessica...

Omfg! You updated! Holy crap! Please update soon if you can! (:

Yay! Update! Poor Randy.

Yay update! I loved this!

EEK! your back! *HUGS* oh how i've missed you! (do you have MSN or FB or anything like that? would like to keep in touch a bit more)

As always love, AWESOME chapter! keep up the excellent work

Think its been awhile since i last read this so i went back and read most of it :) gotta love John (Im going to see the PPV tonight at the theatre)

Caleigh seriously needs to put her foot down and tie Joh to a bed or something when it comes to his stunts concerning Randy and Jess... though he may enjoy that (LOL)

I still cant decide whom i like more out of the three boys. Jeff, Chris or Randy (They all have qualities il ike when concerning Jess) i am a fan of Jeff(but i think i still and always will see him as the big immature baby brother whom is VERY protective) Chris is super sly...but i dont know...

Cant wait to see what Jess decides and who she choses, if she choses...

looking forward to your next update

Love

Your number one reader ;) :P

Have a good week

OMG YES UR BACK! I've been waiting for this update for months, and I had hope it was gonna happen eventually and here it is yayy!

Jess is still taking care of him even if they are getting divorced, man I can't wait for the next update!

Thank you for you for the new chapter! It was great!

hey girlie! so glad to see you back writing! you know i'll be reading :)

I have never been so happy to get an email in my life!

I was just going to bed as it's 4am in Ireland when I got the email for this update, of course sleeping was out of the question til I read my favourite story!

So... Vulnerable Randy has melted her heart, it's obvious she still loves him, you can't just turn off feelings. But forgiving him is another matter.

As for her & Jeff, they would make a good couple, they're two skittles in a bag! Maybe she should think it all over with a bottle of Tequilla... Or perhaps she should try someone new.. *Cough* Punk * Cough* D

Great update, good to see you back, and on fine form too!

Roxxi )