Don't listen to the last reviewer they don't know what they're talking about. I love this story and hopefully you will update soon.

Abraham Lincoln, Thomas Jefferson, Alexander Pope...excuse me? How could that names fit into this story world building aka universe? I can accept the modern monarch setting (like magazine or such, yet the absent of any modern device/technology or transportation and seem still premodern culture), but mixed it with real historical figures? Hard to digest, my friend...

Well, if they wanted to find the princess ASAP, they should just go sneaking arround stealthily looking for information like an intel. You only take fake dentity only if you intend to stay in disguise for a long term. That's is a contradictive, right?

Umm...four generals were asking a doctor whether a girl is a spy or not? Are you serious? Since when a doctor is an expert in spionage? Instead of military generals? Hmmm? I want to laugh but it isn't funny, is it?

Just found this story and its so nice!
Though the main focus of this story is the relationship between Endymion and Serenity, but I really love the moments (and the humor) between SenshiXGenerals!
Please update soon

This was one of my favourite sailor moon stories ever. I loved the plot and humour. I love this version of serenity and Endymion. My advice to you has always been to keep focused on the one relationship (S/E) when writing otherwise it becomes too hard for you to write it. The senshi scenes need to be kept reasonably brief. I’m excited for this story again and can’t wait for more

i had to read this story from the beginning because I forgot what it was about.

Ooo, I see you’ve take down the last chapter (the one with the notes). Hoping this means there will be updates to this wonderful story soon!

Thank you so much for putting your notes in the final chapter. At least we as the readers got the flavor of how things are supposed to evolve. It’s been a wonderful journey and I enjoyed reading this story very much. It’s fantastic:D

Wow! One of the cutest stories ever! It’s brilliant!

Fantastic story I read everything in almost 1 and a half days. I found it refreshing and so much fun. You accurately portray Endy and Serenity's relationship and give it so much heart and warmth. While pointing out the quirks they both have the endear then to each other and fit them together. I adore your take on the Generals it's so much fun to see them in everyday life as average men under the command and friendship of the prince. It's a shame they don't get much focus in the manga or anime because you make them so fascinating. I love their devotion to Endy and how they do their best to match make him and Serenity. It was perfect naming her Usagi while her memories were going be it re so sweet having the prince name her. I love Usagi's interactions with the generals as well and how easily she gets along with them. Their like a bunch of big brothers. I also love am truly impressed on how you portrayed the courtship of the generals and guardians. It has to be one of the most endearing things in this story. Their relationships really fit and it seems like they were all made for each other instead of just pairing them off with different generals. Zoi' and Ami made one of the best couples in the story hands down. I also really enjoy the detailed background you gave this story. It really adds the depths of things. It was a refreshing exquisite experience to be able to read a story that fits so well into all of the characters. Though you did not finish it thanks for letting us have a chance to see your notes and final plans it still helped the story end on a satisfactory note. Definitely one of my favorite Sailor Moon fanfics a hidden gem if ever I've seen one. Thank you for writing it.

Soo lost man

So this was freaking awesome! No sure I like the last part with them just barging in and fighting. Although the butt kicking and reveal scenes were pretty awesome. And the implied scene with Ami in Zoi's bed was really funny too. Thanks for writing and please keep up the great work! -Jesi Ki Kage

Okay, so first of all I have to congratulate you on writing such a fanfiction, with such a quality.

I cannot help but be in awed with how you wrote the characters, and I know in disclaimers you wrote that you couldn't have imagined Sailor Moon because you were not a genius, but let me tell, you this is oe of the best thing I ve ever read.

I just...I m reading Sailor Moon and watching Sailor Moon mainly because I love Usagi and Mamoru, but your fanfiction...This is the first time I got way more interested in what was happening with the Senshi ( with or without the generals) I love how you wrote them, how against going to Earth they were, and how they react to their duty, and act and what they did to approach the prince etc...Pretty much everything.

I loved the Generals dearly, and of course Usagi / Endymion, but what you did with the Senshi blew up my mind. I really...I can't even expressed how awed and freaking grateful I am, because you completely wrote their world, you completely imagined it, and you made it so...so..so real. So true, and so cool. And so terrible.

I love how you wrote how feminist they would appear lol, because of course they would, seeing who they are and were they come from.

I m so freaking annoyed at myself right now, because I cannot convey enough how much I loved your fanfiction, and how grateful I am that you wrote it and gave me such a joy while reading it ( I swear I was excitedly clapping hands more than once, in anticipation. It was a super exciting story)

I really like how you gave them such a thorough background, how you wrote everything and made it seem plausible. I really love Mercury, Venus, Mars, Jupiter, Neptune and Uranus. I was so happy each time I reach a part about them. Their dynamics, how they interact, their caracters, how they think and act, how they are due to also to their planets, and their friendship, and role in general, and their dynamics with the generals and the prince...How angry and furious they were at being on Earth, how they missed Serenity and were angry/furious about the whole situation lol and wanting to blow their top at her, ...Pretty much EVERYTHING.

Also, I cannot thank you enough for giving us such a closure. When I saw your note, I knew you had decided to not finish it (and the date of the last update made me think it was either Hiatus or permanant hiatus anyway, so I knew and I was counting chapters, waiting for it ;-; to end and happy each time I had still a lot to read). I did not think you would give us something like that. Something so great, and for this I thank you once again. I loved the pat where the girls revealed themselves to the boys,( lol at the comment about Uranus) and how angry they all were and threatening etc and their glamour fell,and show themselves (lol at the Generals face when they probably also see their very short skirts lol especially for ladies lol) and they used their power in front of them.

That was way way above my expectations, which were anyway already super high due to the quality of your fanfiction. Reaching this chapter, I wasn't even sad that it was the last chapter, because I was already so happy with all you offered, that I could deal with the fact that you didn't finish it. I was already really grateful for such a great story, that made me squeal, laugh, dream. That opened a whole new world in front of my eyes, in a way. But then, you gave us this, this chapter which gave us a glimpse on what you were planning, and lots and lots of writing, and honestly, I was overjoyed. I m so happy for this, that you gave us this.

Ugh. My excitement and happiness, and how grateful I am is making me not coherent enough and I cannot express myself well, but here it is. Thank you, a thousands and more thank you

they are very umm...what can i say? stupid... cause HOW COULD YOU BE SO OBVIOUS