Reviews for On the way down |
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Sorcerer's Muse chapter 14 . 3/30 To be fair, they did announce themselves. But wow, that would definitely lead to a few years in therapy. |
Sorcerer's Muse chapter 9 . 3/29 Ok, I snorted when Hermione told Ron she'd picked the wrong one. |
HJP4Life chapter 16 . 10/25/2019 Cheers! Great story, I'm glad I took the time to read it! |
marclapin chapter 16 . 10/22/2019 not great not terrible story |
Hazel chapter 16 . 1/26/2019 This is fun! Hermione is a riot. Lmao I can't stop laughing at her. Kinda out of character but... She's pregnant so it's plausible. |
sbmcneil chapter 15 . 10/4/2017 I really can't see Harry or Ginny acting like this at all. It's like you switched the couples up. I can't see Hermione being married with children at 24. I think she would want to wait. Harry would want a family as he's never had one. I would think he would be married with children at an earlier age. |
sbmcneil chapter 12 . 10/4/2017 I still think she was a bit psychotic. How is two weeks early premature? Sorry, but I didn't think the whole chapter made sense. I did like that they had twins, but I can't see prim and proper Hermione being that vulgar. |
sbmcneil chapter 11 . 10/4/2017 Hermione is pregnant, not psychotic. I really can't see her acting this crazy. |
RAVENCLAWDISTRICT1 chapter 7 . 2/21/2017 you tell'em Ron! |
RAVENCLAWDISTRICT1 chapter 12 . 2/20/2017 I was too! |
crazyblonde chapter 4 . 12/7/2016 I loved this fic! It was so cute and sad and happy and AHHHHH LILY AND JAMES The only part I have to criticize is the fact that you put Charlie and Tonks together and that Remus only showed up once. If you're going to bother keeping them both alive you might as well ship them. BUT I LOVED THIS FIC SO MUCH GOD BLESS |
nayin1704 chapter 1 . 8/1/2016 Okay |
slytherclaw7 chapter 16 . 7/25/2016 Excellent, beautiful story! |
AnonymousWriter23456 chapter 16 . 11/17/2015 WHOAAA this was amazing and I Liked it very much. Yay. Thank you. |
AnonymousWriter23456 chapter 12 . 11/16/2015 I WAS! I was! I guessed twins! |