I loved this fic, I would like to know if it is complete and if is not I wonder how it ends, because it don't say if it is complete.
I think it has more to tell us about Severus mind and Dumbledor sins.
Thank you for this fic so beautifully wrote.
I'm sorry for mispelling or grammar errors in my review I'm not a English Speaker.

This is absolutely stunning. Let me explain:

The vivid imagery itself is amazing. The details and depth are wonderful. The whole thing as played of as an orchestra- marvelously.

~V.

PLEASE,PLEASE, PLEASE continue!

UPDATE! this story is SO GOOD!

It's good; not confusing. Understandable, really - Albus needs to react to everything that's happened, if he is to understand what Severus has gone through and attempt to bring him back. Will he? Please update! Thank you!

Wonderful story. Very sad. I like the Ravenclaws view of Dumbledore.

So sad! Loved it.

Very bloody. I got a bit confused and overwhelmed, I have to admit, by the sheer amount of it all. So, is the last reviewer correct? Does Snape blame himself for it all, and that's why it's there in the first place? Or is it more in an accusatory vein for Albus?

Good update overall. I don't mind being uncertain of the intent in Chap. 10. I'm expecting answers as we go along.

Wow. Of course, he'd love to blame Snape for every single death rather than himself...

Don't worry. Snape already does, or they wouldn't be there.

Update soon plz. There aren't enough of the cutsie fathering Sev fics. This 1 is very cute 2. ADORABLE!

So please update soon, unless that was the end. If it was, I want more.

Dark Foxling, over and out -

Cheers.

Very good story :3

whoa cant wait for more loving it

Wonderful story! I hope you update again soon!

Well - very dramatic. The fact that Sirius had never heard even a rumour that Snape was a DE shows he was never a very active one, but he was young and I suppose could have been panicked into lashing out wildly like this, as sometimes happens with young soldiers.

Btw in the previous chapter you were confusing England with Britain. That's a bit like saying "Illinois" when you mean "the USA", right? England is just one part of Britain, and Hogwarts isn't in it.

The description of Severus's nightmare view of Hogwarts is very vivid, but he's being most unfair to Albus (and personally I dislike fics which take the line that Albus somehow *made* Snape turn spy, because it cheapens Snape so much).

We've seen enough now to know that Tom was a born psychopath, already a calculating murderer in his mid teens. Voldemort or something like it would always have been his future, so if Snape hadn't turned Death Eater, hadn't betrayed the Potters, Tom hadn't attacked Harry and killed Lily, the result would have been that Tom wouldn't have been disembodied but would probably have swept to victory in the 80s and instigated some sort of dreadful magical Thousand Year Reich.

And yes, it *is* worth sacrificing lives to stop that happening, because the Death Eater regime would kill a lot more people than died in the campaign. I would have thought Snape would know that.