Reviews for Words that can Never be Said
SheWhoFliesOnHerOwnWings chapter 6 . 7/19/2009
Really love this story! Please update ASAP
Molleyn chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
*annoyed wail* Hope you finish this some day...! I really like it.
FreeSpiritSeeker chapter 5 . 8/24/2008
please please please update this story! It's fantastic, I'm really enjoying it and I would love to read more of it. You have a wonderful writing style, it's very entertaining and easy to understand. Please update!
Maddsy chapter 6 . 8/21/2008
i really love this story...please update
Destiny McNeil chapter 5 . 4/24/2008
write more now thxs
quicksilver2402004 chapter 5 . 11/22/2006
This is a really good story. You writing is excellent.
Silverfox-925 chapter 5 . 8/11/2006
Please you must write more, I can't wait for an update. Plus this story sounds really good, so PLEASE UPDATE ASAP.
strapped to a comet chapter 5 . 8/10/2006
This is great so far! I really like how you're writing Jack. Just one suggestion - maybe some dividing lines when you switch between Riddick and Jack? Other than that, I can't wait 'til the two meet up!

~Karys
Animagious-White-Tiger chapter 5 . 2/26/2006
Looks like you have a great story in the making, now all you have to do is finish it.
Kirdary chapter 5 . 2/18/2006
ya know ya really should update because it's very good story
AliasSpyCrazy chapter 5 . 2/14/2006
Hahahah. AWOL; that’s funny. It sucks you haven’t had them find each other yet but the process there is very good. So keep it up and I hope you update soon. See, I was even nice enough to review ALL chapters, not just the last one, to give you more reviews. Now, you be nice and update soon k. You’re doing great so yeah. More please!
AliasSpyCrazy chapter 4 . 2/14/2006
Sweet! It’s cool how you go from him to her. I like that. We get both views on things and it makes it interesting. I cant believe she made it so far in the academy. Zack and Pete seem like really fun guys. I cant wait to see what happens next. You rule! Now, to chapter 5.
AliasSpyCrazy chapter 3 . 2/14/2006
Oh I knew it. She did join. So, its been like 4 years later right? How cool is that. I cant wait to see what happens when they reunite. I bet its going to be exciting! Whoohoo. Keep it up and see ya soon. Onto chapter 4 now.
AliasSpyCrazy chapter 2 . 2/14/2006
Another great chapter. I liked the present Riddick gave Jack. It was pretty cool. Poor Jackie, what she must be going through. I like how you’re writing. It’s really good. I bet she’s going to join the flight academy. That’d be cool, if not, that’s cool too. Well, onto chapter 3 now, see ya soon.
AliasSpyCrazy chapter 1 . 2/14/2006
Oh great chapter. I loved it. So sad that he’s going away. You’re doing a great job with the characters. They’re all perfectly written and awesome. Well,now onto chapter 2. See ya soon.
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