nice

The fundamental Drako would never go with Ron's sister. However, if we consider book 7, then it could take place.

OK. Interesting

Rather abrupt.

First the discription of MAGIC sounded an awful lot like Star Wars's the FORCE. 'All around you it is. In you, in all living trhings. Then Yoda's voice in Harry's head. Is there something you (The author) is tring to tell us?

Great story, And a totally beautiful ending!

Sorry you lost me, not a bad story line but the whole sex thing makes no sense what so ever! They can't have sex cause voldy will figure out Harry cares about her if they do, but he can profess his love for her and can ask her to marry him ans voldy can figure that out? Sex is nothing compared to true love! It wouldn't be so bad if you would have set that up and then left it. But no every chapter some times more than once a chapter you put them on a scene where he has to tell her gets old and repetitive and takes away the story. As I said sex would be easier to hide than true love.

At first I thought all the Star Wars references were just quirky. Now I'm wondering if this will become a cross-over story. I guess I need to read the next part of your story and see. lol

That was possibly one of the most moving wedding chapters I have ever read... Thank you

Wow. This story blew me away. The characters were so well written, and the romance was just perfect. Cant wait to read the other two!

I liked the story very much, although, there were times I felt like there were parts missing. There seemed to be things pop up, like powers and such, with no explanation. But accounting for the holes, I thought you did a good job, thank you.

il n'y aura plus de petits potter?

Loved it! :) Great job!

Holy crow, this was a fantastic work! I will be reading the next part in the very near future. Thank you for creating such an amazing story!

this is a great series of tales but the fact that the author can not spell the simple word THAN really is annoying. To keep finding 'then' written instead drives me nuts.