| Reviews for Children |
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  Jake chapter 9 . 8/22/2019 can you please add more chapters like a lo9t of them becausde I love your site please. |
 edhuff chapter 1 . 4/5/2019 Spellcheck, proofread and use space bar. Decide on American or English spelling. Check for missing or duplicate swords. This will result in something readable. |
| Coral Port chapter 5 . 1/18/2019 JAMES ARTHER POTTER! IT’S JAMES SIRIUS POTTER! HOW COULD YOU MESS SOMETHING LIKE THAT UP?! |
| lily potter 3333 chapter 1 . 12/20/2018 this chapter was sadly not good there are many mistakes such as died eye moody died son was called James sirius potter NOT AUTHUR 4. tonks and remus died! PLEASE DO YOUR REASEARCH BEFORE WRITING A FANFIC |
| Emma Cow chapter 2 . 6/1/2018 Wow! This is a GREAT fan fiction! |
| gab chapter 4 . 12/31/2017 Harry just couldn't get enough of her could he... |
| IveLostIt chapter 1 . 12/3/2017 pegasi |
| Guest chapter 9 . 6/2/2017 1 |
| Hanya chapter 1 . 11/27/2016 Nice end there! |
| Guest chapter 6 . 11/11/2016 God, you must have a magic touch or something cause I don't know the bloody hell why I started crying when James was born... So emotional |
| Harryandginny chapter 5 . 7/2/2015 HOU CAN'T CONJUIRE FOOD OUT OF THIN AIR from the deathly hallows No effense |
| Harryandginny chapter 4 . 7/2/2015 It is true that James is like Fred and George it proves it in the nineteen years later thing |
| Hetezu chapter 8 . 8/23/2014 YOU STUPID BLOODY IDIOT! |
| pottergeek chapter 8 . 7/19/2014 I was afraid that Ginny would die, and right now tears are coming down my cheeks. This is so sad! |
| Kaya chapter 9 . 3/28/2014 That was awesome! |
