wow...poor guy

Haha, it's really funny, I love it! Write more, I wanna read more! Axl is my favorite character, Zero my second. Me and my friends have a whole inside joke about Zero, X, and Axl. :3

OH! Me like this so far! X3 Don't sweat it.

This is an interesting story... I hope you're still updating it, I'd like to see more!

PLEASE update! I wanna know what happens! I know it's been about a year, but this story is really good~ please don't stop writing!

Palette seems pissed that Axl isn't paying enough attention to her.. aww... ~Update this plz

update this story I'm sure you can do it good

Omigod, I SO did not expect that little turn of events right at the end there! I almost cracked up.

You know, despite the fact that the title should be 'Whose Trophy', unless 'Trophy' is a character's name, you write very well. I like your description and this is the first time in a while that I've read something in the first person that sounded this good. It goes at a good pace, but perhaps you could take your time with it just a tad more. I know it's easier said than done, but I'm sure it wouldn't be hard for you.

Good job though, I hope you can update soon)

Sounds like one blonde's angry, and another's jealous. Heh. But as they say, "when two blondes fight over a redhead, the brunette walks away with 'em." [chuckle]

Yeah, i still like it! please continue!

I like how you've got a brother-brother relationship going on between Axl and Zero. Nicely done.

This is so good you HAVE to write more. And for once i don't mean it saracasticlly [wow!]

This could be interesting.

I like it... Axl eing dragged in the ear, and you made a nice POV. Keep it up, i want to see next chapter.