I liked this story, it was a nice characterization of Zuko's idea of and towards Katara.

Well, I don’t know if you’re going to ever read this, but I just have to tell you how much I enjoyed this ficlet of yours. It is amazing how well you wrote Zuko in his early persona. He was pretty obsessive so it wouldn’t be odd if he got entranced by Katara and her exotic being. I really liked this.
I’m utterly amazed by the fact that the first zutara fanfic out here is from a kataang fan. That’s wonderful! When times here were simpler and ship wars weren’t so chaotic. Sigh. I miss those days.
Any way. Amazing fic. Take care.

I'm not sure what to say. On one side I like it, but on the other there is something that bothers me. I can't though for the life of me put my finger one what.

What? Someone who knows the difference between infatuation and love? Impossible! Interesting little piece. I liked the line about Zuko doing everything passionately. Actually I love that whole paragraph. Great lines in there. Good work!

Ok, I know I'm late since this was posted about... 9 years ago? Woah.

If you're reading this, I gotta say that you wrote this perfectly and it's the first Zutara fic ever, so... Wow. And you're not even a shipper of the two! I'm not sure if you watched the spinoff series "Legend of Korra," but if you have, you must've fangirled when you found out Aang and Katara married and had three kids. Haha. Anyways, I'm not sure if you are still writing fics, but if you are, I hope to see more work from you. You wrote this amazingly.

THE FIRST ZUTARA FIC AHH

But... Isn't this... A zutara? I

"so it became the enemy of love..." thanks that sentence just helped me with a problem )

Short but it says a lot :) Love it~

Wow, you were - as far as I can tell - the first person to ever write a Zutara fic. I love that you used a quote at the beginning. You kept Zuko fairly in character, and your writing is great.

It looks like you hadn't updated in a while, huh? I think you should just make this a one-shot. It sounds good that way. But it's your story, do with it what you will. I'll be waiting for your answer.

This would've turned into an amazing story.

Wow. That was really excellent. You kept Zuko very IC. I loved everything about this one-shot. Really great. :D

You are aware that you created the Zutara shipping one of the biggest pairings in avatar dude I aplaud you

I like how this fic weaves the story and philosophical conceptions of love.