i looked up rio online since i don't remember that name from the manga and it said that rio wwas his mother and she not there a lot so she behind the scenes. anywayyyyyy love your story keep it up!

Did you know that Rin – Pyou – Tou – Sha – Kai – Jin – Retsu – Zai - Zen, is used in a series called ghost hunt? It is favorite sites and has some magic and gifts and stuff. If you hadn't had the chance to watch it, then you should.
I was laughing when you used our because I instantly understood they meaning. Lol love this story!
-WhisperToTheWolves

Kraft good guy?!

Dark gets to be a threesome with satoshi and daichi, right? Cos I love those threesomes, so, pls make a dxdaixsato fic for me? Puppy dog eyes

ehh,,,,your last AN is so funny... ahehehe..:)
anyway, nice fic... :)

Nicely done. In all seriousness, I did notice a few things - like the Krad made the art thing. Which kind of made me raise my eyebrows. You could also even out a few chapters in the middle where things got confusing.

Not that confusing is bad, but readers still want to be able to follow along.

I liked it. Very good job.

The Rin-Pyou, etc was also used in the manga/anime Ghost Hunt, I believe.

Same deal. Ward off bad spirits.

On to the rest of the story.

my only complaint is who the hell is krad in love with? if its dark you could have had an ending sceane between them. or have daisukes dad and satoshi have an aquard conversation.

I'm not sure what the sarcam is about, but it was a good fic. It had a new (a least for me) plot line. The way it ended, I didn't like cause It never showed Daisuke's parents again, Dark after the injurys, and what's going to happen to Krad?

That story was good! I loved it! Although I thought you could have gone a bit deeper into thier life. Like an epilouge perhaps? It's just a suggestion...anyway...it's pretty good! Kepp up the good work!

YAY! This story is totally awesome, funny, cute and full of action it's got everything. Sequal! Can't wait; keep up the good work D

i don't know why i never got to read this last chapter until now but it waas very good.

Somehow, I don't think Satoshi's vacation is going to be that relaxing.

Just a guess.

Keep up the good work.

nice story me is in love with it, write more, write more.

Yay! great story! really really good! but no "fun" scenes? come on now...well anyways great job!