This is too beautiful

AaaW:)

SO CUTE! It's amazing! Keep up the good work!

This is an amazing fanfiction! Great job. :)

Beautiful. :)

Honestly this isn't a review I like to give, but I believe it is necessary. I'd say this was an okay read because I have problems with it. I feel like you've given Sasuke a personality that is contrary to the manga and anime series. There isn't much depth behind him and I'm sad about it. Also, he knew about the kyuubi a little after the chunnin exams when he left Naruto in the rain that day. He may not have known the reason for Naruto's appearance, but it was very obvious his appearance was that of a red fox. I feel like this short story should have been anything but short. The time they spent together could have been 12 or more chapters long. What of Sakura's crush on Sasuke? How does she feel about him coming back to Konoha? I'd expect her to visit on multiple occasions. What about Naruto? Would he be jealous of Sasuke for her love of him? Or if he was homosexual or by-sexual before, would he misinterpret Sasuke and Sakura's relationship and feel like a third wheel? Or maybe try to give Sakura and Sasuke their space because he believes Sasuke to be straight and Naruto's love for him to never be fulfilled. Also, what of Orochimaru? How in the world did Sasuke get the best of him so easily. I know he probably isn't dead, but that scene was much to be desired. As you've probably already watched the series end of Naruto Shippuden your mind has to be coming up with ideas to make another fanfiction right? Maybe remake or re-write this fictional tail in depth? It was a great idea and I think you are selling your self short. Please please answer me back even if you don't want to do anything with it. I'd like to hear from you.

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Absolutely amazing. It's the best SasuNaru I have EVER read! Love it! :DD

Holy crap. I must be a freaking sappy-as-hell person, because I freaking fell in love with this story. Definitely reading this again later!

Wow, and I also realized this is almost a decade old! Neat.

Sorry for deleting this story from my faworites but I have so many I can't keep track of those I really like... so I will be deleting a LOT of stories from my favorites. Sorry TT_TT
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I loved this story it was beautifully written.

omg love it... a happy ending

I loved it;beautiful, and i'm secretly hoping sasukes return will happen just like that X) LOVED IT!

I enjoyed this. I felt for Naruto(such depression) and Sasuke(I always thought he was weak). This was wonderfully written.

I'm liking it so far and damn can Naruto be so forgiving.

Sweet,gooey, mush! I love it! by the way, what does Usuratonkachi mean?