hiko being a big softy has slain me, you will have to come and reattach my heart to my insides. i read this story like once/twice a year because it is seriously the sweetest thing omg

I give this one-shot two thumbs up! I really enjoyed this fluffiness between Hiko and Kenshin, even if Kenshin was really out of it over half the time. ;) I thought you kept both Hiko and little!Kenshin in character, and I hope you write more for this fandom! Please keep up the great work!

That was unbelievably cute. I adore how Hiko & Kenshin react to one another's presence.

Im slightly amused that there is a 'correct' way to hurl a explosive device, but at the same time, curious.

Aw... Love it

Ari chan

thats absolutely adorable

Aw! that was so cute! i love it when you express Hiko as a good person, and not just an arogant jerk. is he your favourite character? you write about him alot... kep writing! K~R

Ah, one of the rarely mentioned 'joys' of having small children about...you suddenly learn that things that you have never considered all that dangerous, in fact, *are*. Poor Hiko.

I liked this story quite a lot. The pace ans style were excellent, and I enjoyed the characterisation. How Hiko could be both caring and aloof at the same time was perfect, and Kenshin's reactions to everything were fitting, I think. Well done.

aw poor kenshin!

aww so cute! It's nice to know hiko has a nice side too :)

I think it was a wonderful cute little one shot :P

That was so suspenseful... I was on my toes 'till the end! Hope to hear more like this from you!

Aw, so cute! n_n

sweet _ i love how you sure the softer side of Hiko. plus little kenshin is so cute.

OMG I loved this story! Yay! *floats on air* Fatherly Hiko! I love fics where Kenshin and Hiko are shown to have a father-son relationship rather than a Shishou-deshi relationship! Thanks for the fantastic story!