Another brilliant fic with not enough reviews to it's name! You wouldn't believe how hard I rifle through the site looking for a good read.

Any chance of seeing this one updating like Slings and Arrows?

I'm all curious now as to why Draco's upset.

You've opened up so many possibilities thoughout the chapters - Lucius and his behavious, and then how that may effect his son - who isn't in the best of states at the moment.

Your portrayal of Severus Snape is brilliant - the TB and his ongoing sickness is an interesting point for explaining his ever present anger with life, especially in this story.

Please do continue with the one - I know it's been over a year but good fanfiction is becoming harder and harder to come by these days.

I don't know if you're one of those authors who can't stand continuing a fic if the latest book will effect their plot but PLEASE don't let it effect this one. I'm enjoying it so much!

Until next time (I hope!)

Bright Eyes

Great chapter, as usual. Your story is has a beautiful poetic style to it.

I hope Hermione will tell someone that Draco is in trouble. Surely Snape would care? He really sems to be in bad shape.

I can see a budding Harry/Hermione romance as well. So what will they be for this ball?

Severus does deserve some happiness and I do hope you have a happy ending planned for him. He seems like he's feeling better. Maybe he could change from the nasty git to the even-tempered git, who knows?

Severus had TB? How awful for him!

I love this line: "He was standing over her, like rage made into flesh, and she wondered if he would actually hurt her."

Wow, Malfoy is gernealy written as an evil git, but...wow...what he did to that girl was...wow.

Severus really opened up to her.

Update when you're able!

I like this story very much! I actually prefer Snape with an OC rather than Hermione. It just seems to fit him more, to me at least.

This sotry is very ununsual, something I really like in a fic. I can't wait to read what else you have in store for our dear Potions Master!

Is there something more going on with Draco?

If you like to read Snape/OFC fics check out ThouandI's story and also slave4severus. They both write good Snape/OFC fics and maybe you'll get more reviews, who knows!

You make a valid point. Have removed all but the first two.

It was originally posted in two chunks, and I took it down and edited it in order to make it less pathetically Sueish in the beginning chapters.

okay you made a MAJOR mistake when posting this. you posted all the chapters at once, you don't do that because when someone looks at it they see 18 chapters 1 review and they immediately think the story is no good.

you have to post in a steady pace, once every two weeks or once a week.

I myself haven't read for that reason alone. When looking for a story I go by reviews and the summary.

So I recommend you taking all but the first chapter off.

Oh yeah, and as for the romantic parts how FAR will they go?

I accidentally skipped to chapter 6 and my eyebrow raised at the point I stopped at.

but then again I didn't finish reading it so

I have no idea.

so... yeah. I might come back later.

The most amazing story I have ever read.

-Geena