...and I cried again and im reviewing again. poor eiji but I feel sorrow for the hyotei team too, they love oishi too, [how could they not?] I think atobe has a crush. [a possessive one at that] beautiful story

... after I read chapter 11 I started crying, oishi is so kind...

this was your first PoT fanfic? OMG THAT'S AWESOME! this is one of the best stories I've read for a long time! I'm glad they got together...

poor Atobe...nah, who am I kidding? in this one I hate him.

(usually an Atobe-fan XD)

Well...I've been sitting here for about two hours and read this fic from the first to the last chapter, and what can I say? ... I freaking LOVE it! O.O My gosh, after fifteen minutes it became like a drug and I couldn't get enough of it and now I've already reached it's end.

Your writing is just terrific! I don't know how many times I almost cried when reading, and often I had to go back and read something again, because it was so good.

Gah, it is hard to give constructive critique... you really had me mesmerized, and I hope this wasn't too weird. Thank you for such a wonderful fiction!

EK! AK!

OMG, OMG, OMG! this story is so good and this is your first fanfic? The ending was amazing and so adorable, i absolutly love this pairing! make more plz!

I like happy endings. Though I wish things had settled before the day of the Nationals (such as tranferring back), it was still a good way to end the story.

I think it's still a good chapter. What just happened would cause such strong feelings though I find it a little hard to imagine Captain Tezuka and Oishi acting that way. Maybe I'm just not used to it, especially since they never showed it in the anime. I think the other reason is the artists made the characters look too old to be jr. high students, and I'm just not used to seeing adults behaving this way in front of people in real life. Well, as I said, a lot of pain and emotion is involved, so it's still possible. At least they are trying to get things straightened out.

I was glad that things have started to look up again. I'm glad they all realized that it was the only chance.

I was almost in tears, too. Actually, throughout most of the story, I was almost in tears.

I didn't think anyone was OOC. Emotions can be powerful, and there are times when people aren't themselves. We've seen that in the anime as well, and an example was Episode 52.

I know what you mean by SAT and AP. Though it's been years, I still have bad memories of them. Those things are unfair and evil, just like Atobe.

You almost drove me to tears, too. It was pretty sad, especially when they were so close only to have all of it taken away again.

I didn't find the characters really OOC. I had hoped that Oishi would regain some memories if he heard that he was part of the Golden Pair. It was cute and funny the way Kikumaru behaved trying to get his memories back.

I knew the Seigaku regulars were going to get caught. I thought they should have known better to not draw attention. They shouldn't have been so loud and expressive. Then again, they're in jr. high. It's also true that though they are good tennis players they can be very stupid on other issues.

I also laughed when Captain Atobe made that mistake. Yes!

I don't think your chapters are getting worse. They are interesting and can tug emotions.

I could feel the tension between the opponents (or former teammates) during the match. I also knew Kikumaru would be really upset and need someone to keep him under control. You showed that though he tries to hide everything by acting cheerful, he'll still streaightforwardly show his true feelings.

It is also very typical of Captain Tezuka to hide many things, even his expressions.

You continued with the good job in showing Oishi's character. He still has a lot of it left despite the amnesia. At least he is nice and fair, even with opponents. We need more characters and people like that in the world.

So far, you've showed the friendship in Seigaku pretty well. The characters really care for one another. We also need more of this in the world. I wish people were more like that in real life.

It's good that Oishi didn't lost all of his memories. At least he still remembers tennis skills, playing doubles, and caring about others. I have been wondering how the Golden Pair would play when split by schools, but looks like things have been worked out. I had also been wondering why Kikumaru did not seem to panic or be bothered by his doubles partner's absence. Looks like he really was, and it didn't need much description since we would expect it.

Ever since Captain Atobe first met Oishi, I knew he would plot things, and so far he seems to be doing so. I also suspected that Captain Tezuka would appoint Fuji as the new Co-Captain.

Strange things happen, especially in fiction, so it's possible for Oishi to score against Atobe. Maybe his amnesia helped.

Hyotei, especially Atobe, was in character. So was Oishi despite his amnesia. I guess this shows that memory loss doesn't always result in personality loss, which in this case is good.

I just began reading this today, and so far, it's interesting. A few scenes almost drove me to tears.

Very interesting. I couldn't help but reading all the chapters in one breath. The story is pleasantly dramatic. And I feel it's just the right decision to choose Hyotei as the school that Oishi has been transfered to, 'cause the other options may reduce the tension and fights between Oishi and the Buchou of the school.

May I ask for the permission to translate the whole fic into Chinese? I wonder if there's someone putting the same request but earlier than me, since this is a very good piece of Tezuka/Oishi fic.