Beautiful and oddly touching. I think you delved into Gluttony's mind very nicely and made him both believable and sympathetic. Poor guy.

Reading this before even seeing the episodes it took place in made me sad, but now having seen for myself just how depressed Gluttony was, reading this is ten times worse.
Well done! ;_;

Dawn

Oh my god... THE FEEEELZ!

Im crying.

I just finished the series today. This was just what I needed.

Poor Gluttony. T_T I love how you write the poor, simple workings of his mind. Heh, "brown one" and "yellow one"... "the big room"... it's just so endearing.

I love this.

KAWAII! Poor Gluttony! I loved the way you put Gluttony into character with his childlike mind, and the end when he finally finds Lust! *breaks down crying* kawaii, kawaii

People are complaining about grammatical ERRORS? They're grammatical works of genius, to be honest. It fits Gluttony's childish persona, and is perfect for his desperation and pain as well.

All in all, this was an excellent story - top notch. It made me really feel bad for Gluttony. And that's saying something, since I hate Gluttony.

*_*

Aw

so sad and cute!

Really, I felt SO sorry for him in when this happened.. And I was pissed too, because I liked Lust, she was cool XD

Anyway, its just like everyone else said: the last lines were AMAZING!

You rock!

I don't understand... what happened at the end?

i love the idea of gluttony having a childlike mind and lust being his mommy. three thumbs up!

(Half way to tears) That's so sad! But so beautiful! I hearby deem it the best Gluttony fic ever. (Now where's my 'best so-and-so fic' deeming wand?)

Very well-written piece from Gluttony POV. The word choice of yours fitted him perfectly. Poor Gluttony.

Oh That was...ALSOME!I LOVED IT. the last 2 lines *His tongue hurts and then all of him does and then everything goes dark but he doesn't care.

He's found Lust* Made me cry. I give you BEST line(s) of the day award

...So sad. I knew Lust died, but still. That was a good Gluttony POV. Wah...Why did she have to die... T.T

Excellent job! Gluttony's in character and I like how it felt so much like stream of conscienceness. The word choices fit with his personality and it told the story of those last moments with Gluttony (well, while he was conscious, anyway) splendidly. Well done!