It's too bad it's left unfinished. Good read so far. Thanks for writing.

If you are not going to complete it.. would you like to help me add an ending to it? I have never written anything in fanfiction..

I realy enjoyed reading this.. were you ever going to finish it?

This is great. The characterization is spot on and I can picture everyone speaking in my head. I'd love to get some closure! You practically made me start shipping them, you can't leave me hanging!

Oh... and it was just getting GOOD! Why'd you end it...? I liked this Marthe and the Examen that was coming up. This was good and how could you leave with a cliffie like THAT? I mean come on... meanie. Now I'll always wonder what would have happened...

*sigh*

Good jod, too bad you didn't finish it.

Moon

who's the letter from?

Very entertaining. It certainly tells the story back-story nicely. Please continue.

Hi, I'm liking this story and see that it hasn't been added to for a while. Im new to YB and hoping to read as much as I can. Any chance of more chapters being added.

Thanks, Sharon K.

only one suggestion. FINISH IT! I really loved the story and was amazed by how close your portayal of the characters was to that of how I imagined them. It was and excellent story and I can't wait until I can read it when it is finished.

Keep going! My gosh, i've become obsessed with this story! Keep going or I'll probably go crazy! Please! Young blades is one of my reasons to live!

This is really good. Would you finish it still by any chance?

More please...no fair to leave us here. I think you've succeded in giving out lively inventer more depth and personality than in the series I like it. Keep up the good work

please continue. I love the story. can't wait to see what happens next.

It's really hard to find well written Young Blades stories so I was pleasantly surprised when I found this one. The characterization is excellent and I love how you're giveing Siroc a bigger role. You haven't updated for a while but this is definately worth continuing, I'm completely intrigued.

Please continue this story or at least e-mail me if you need help. I love Young Blades and Siroc and Jaqueline are my favourite characters. If you need help just ask but please finish it!