Finally Yami and Hikari reconnect!
Jack! Lol!

Well, this is interesting.
Yeah, Bakura would be pissed. Good to see the Pharaoh attempting to find out what brought him here. Poor Yugi has been too out of it to ask (though he would have trouble asking) what the message is all about. Ryou and Marik is nearly the same boat.
I feel sorry for Marik's yami. His nervousness about his 'ka' is understandable.

Good job Ryou! Now Yami and Yugi won't be adrift when they meet with the SG team. Will the knowledge of aliens be tipped in the audience with the Pharaoh (which no one has yet to tell Yugi about so he can visit Egypt, I hope Ishizu is going to Japan to tell him)? I wonder what is in the message tube.
Marik is not a happy camper. I bet he assumes another fortune teller dictated the message carved on the tube.

"Sia smiled as Carter proved one of the universal truths : If it is pretty, and sparkles, a woman will surely find it fascinating."
...really ? Really ? That's awfully lame. I'm embarassed for you.

すごい "sugoi" means amazing. I've checked every dictionary/translation I know.

So...Ryou's Mom and sister are alive in this 'verse? How nice for him

Interesting but a wee bit confusing story

please let them hurry! the others need help! awesome story! please update again soon!

Amazing. I am excited to see just what is coming next. Keep up the great work.

Jk-chan

I didn't see any glaring misspellings or other mistakes. You didn't describe anyone in any detail, assuming that everyone reading your story knows who you are talking about is a bad thing. One last thing, I'm not going to read any farther because I don't like boy/boy stuff and the stuff with the spirits from Yugioh is just weird. I did like your overall writing style, it just needs some work.

There is nothing very striking about this chapter. All I have to say is that your dictionary was right, "sugoi," does have the literal meaning of "something horrible," but, it is used in a fashion similar to how English speakers might say something is "wicked."

Considering how many times I've heard a character say "sugoi," in anime themselves, I'm going to have to say that avoiding it isn't doing anything. I can't say for sure if your dictionary is wrong, since I don't know the literal meaning, but it might very well be wrong.

The only thing I have to say is that Chichi-san and haha-san seem strange, why isn't Ryou using the more usual Otou-san and Okaa-san? And most people in Japan refer to younger siblings with just a name, not sibling terminology. Oh, and I'm pretty sure "Bakira," is a typo.

Even with the errors the story still looks promising, so will see.

I can't wait for the next chapter! I really love Stargate and Yugioh crossed over and so far this story is my favorite! It's intersting how it keeps you guessing on what will happen next, it's fun to read!

Dang why'd Malik have to go...extra pressure is on him now to get to his peeps and tell the sg1 and co. wats going on...poor Malik...and ...well...all of them...

CONTINUE!