This Iowa beautiful! I just read both chapters and they both feel so real and genuine... I can seriously hear Landon and French speaking in this and I could see these events happening in an episode! Well done!

OH, PLEASE POST THE NEXT CHAPTER! I hate when fanfictions never get finished... they're like little dreams forgotten...but anyways, I love the imagery in both chapters so far, and their attitudes are pretty canon. So far I really like it, and I know there aren't many HTH fanfictions, so it's up to people like you to have fanfictions that really stand out and inspire.
Anyways, I'll follow this and if you continue I'll read it. :)

I am enjoying your story so far, having been a big fan of the Highway to Heaven series. I hope that you write some more so we can find out what happens during their "vacation".

I really liked the twist. You seem to have Jonathan down pretty well.

hope you post again soon.

your title aloen made me want to read.

Great story, Kitty! I love Highway to Heaven! I hope you update soon!

Yours Sincerely,

Sherlock's Sparrow

Whoa. Very good, very original, very... Mark. All his comments seemed 'dead'-on, heehee. Pardon the pun, I have a tendency to do that without realizing it. :D

Methinks I'm hooked. Me also thinks you need to update! ;)

I really like this story! When you have time, write more! You've got me hooked! :D

(Hope you don't mind me giving a tip: When you call God things like "he", "him", and "the boss", I think you're sapposed to capitalize the first letters. Like "He", "Him" and "The Boss". *wink*)

Cool! I liked it!