Reviews for The Depth Of Demon Bonds |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So sad. But does Kurama have so little faith in Hiei? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, that was awesome. And unbelievably hot. Hiei and Kurama are awesome together! Thanks for taking the time to write and post this. :) :) :) :) :) :) :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() If you're revising, you may want to go back thru and check grammar. I can't say it was horrible but it's kinda bad. I love this story, and all of it's followings, but the grammar I'm picking up in this one is bad. For example, there was a 'they might would take' and in the last line it should be sense, not since. |
![]() ![]() This is my all time favorite Kurama/Hiei Story Ever and believe me i have read ALOT lol anyway very night keep up the great work |
![]() ![]() lol they are watching inuyasha haha i loved this story gunna continue reading! 0 u made kurama cry how could you lol jk |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a kick ass story! You rock keep it up this is my fav. pair from the YuYu show! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG u can't scare people lyk that! lol i really thought it was over. This has 2 be one of the best kuramaXhiei pairings ever great job! |
![]() ![]() hai ther my friend how r u doing fine i hope i just done reading this story and let me tell u that it was one hell of a story and i loved every minuit of it so thanx 4 a work well done PS: i hope u caunt me as one of your fan member list cause sure like hell i love your ways spacially when it come 2 my favorit demon HIEI i love him so much and i promiss 2 help withe new ideas on your new stories if i can lol your fan YAOINUTZ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well. I've already read most of this series since I'm rereading it, so I know what happens, and yet... it still made me cry! That's not nice... lol. Anyways, very good chapter. The only thing getting on my nerves is how you use periods at the end of quotation marks instead of commas. lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, poor Kurama...and HIei...I WANNA READ THE NEXT ONE! Love it! hope you can get it up soon! SO kawaii! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, wow. Chapter 7 is so awesome. I love it. I sang along while I was reading! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OF COURSE I'LL KEEP READING! As long as they're together, I'll keep reading (even though this is the 1st chappie of this story I've read and reading angst causes me misery, pain and grief) You rock and I will definitely read your other story once I finish with this one. *goes back and reads whole thing* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a sad ending for this chapter. Of course Hiei will come back, right? Can't wait for the next chappie. |
![]() ![]() I'll be your beta reader if you want. This is good but why is this story updated? I thought you were already finished with this one; because I know I remember reading this chapter. |