Reviews for Fraternité
Mariposa Noir chapter 42 . 3h
Without a doubt, this has been one of the best stories I have read on this site.
The way in which you intertwined the versions of Leroux, Kay and Webber was done with intelligence, managing to trace a credible rhythm using the necessary background.
It is very satisfying to read content where you can understand that Christine's love for Raoul and Erik is beautiful in her own way, being that while most people have a soul mate, Christine has the joy of having two.
On the other hand, the mystery, action and romance that you forged was masterfully developed and I must congratulate you for the great research that you carry out to put amazing historical details and descriptions of where the protagonists travel.
I have nothing more to say, good job!
muguetmuse chapter 42 . 7/28
goddamn it's 6am and I'm delirious. but I shall try to articulate. this was such a wonderful, well-researched, well-written, well-developed, well everything that I can hardly fathom that I have finished this. I'm so empty now! all descriptions of the changing settings, the suspense, the relationship tensions all around, the way the past and its people are laid to rest is simply exquisite. your foreshadowing was also brilliant. and this epilogue was so clever and truly is a great addition and execution through the eyes of Jean-Paul The twists and turns really had me there and at last, they're all able to find peace and it is beautifully rewarding to have made it to the end. A magnificent read. I would give anything to read it all over again as I have this first time.
muguetmuse chapter 34 . 7/28
you had me going there for awhile holy shit I was freaking out but now I'm like.. sad wow Raoul was truly done DIRT BY HIM. ABSOLUTE DIRT.
muguetmuse chapter 24 . 7/26
this fic legit gives me a stroke with my stress from all the suspense and christine''s boldness but we love to see it ajddjdjd
muguetmuse chapter 19 . 7/26
OOF Christine is an utter queen idcidc.
NerdyLibrarian chapter 5 . 6/15
Ok, I definitely do like this.
NerdyLibrarian chapter 2 . 6/15
Oooh, I think I like this...
phantomerik1113 chapter 8 . 5/18
I just love reading stories with Nadir!
Guest chapter 30 . 4/22
This chapter knocked me flat on the GROUND. You are so good at this!
Guest chapter 19 . 4/21
I've been devouring this fic for the past 36 hours, but I had to stop here to let you know that this moment is incredible. There's so much beauty and messy feeling throughout this whole thing, but this chapter ending? Right here? I could cry. Thank you.
midnightdew chapter 42 . 4/18
This is the best POTO sequel ever. I consider it canon - the character development of Erik and Christine is top notched. I really like the way you didn't make her just accept the murderer part of his past like what other fictions did - gloss over it as though it's nothing. I love the conflict between them and the redemption and the ending too. Looking forward to read more of your writings.. It'd be great if you could expand more on Jean Paul growing up etc. I'm afraid I now hold all other POTO fan fiction to your standard and so far, none come up close to the mark. All d best and thanks for the gem of this fiction.
Ms. Myth chapter 42 . 2/18
There are too many things about this story that I love. The way you seamlessly blend elements of Leroux and Kay into a mostly ALW framework. The tight plot, the suspense, and the plot twists. The stunning descriptions of the locales the characters visit. The character development and individual personalities for each character, even the OCs. Christine is the protagonist, and the one who undergoes the most change. The greatest moment is her masterstroke in tricking the trap-door lover to the altar. This is wonderfully crafted, with an extremely satisfying ending. I was almost reluctant to read the final chapter because I enjoyed reading it so much.
guiltypleasureffnet chapter 42 . 1/11
i read your story in two days, staying up much later than I should have considering the disturb sleep I have had thanks to a cranky 3 year old. At times I laughed and at times I cried. Thank you for your wonderful story and wiriting. I shall read your others and those you recommend. Thank you again.
Merra Dawson chapter 42 . 11/29/2019
My God this story is breathtaking! I really do hope you still read reviews on your story even though it has been finished for a while. I am in awe of how everything happened in this story. I truly believe you captured Erik and Christine 's characters, and i was on the literal edge of my seat reading the whole thing. I started it yesterday afternoon and couldn't put it down until i finished it today. This fanfiction is a whole new level od storytelling. The adventure and mystery and thrill was insane! There were multiple pages that i screenshotted just so i could read them and reread them over and over because they were so well crafted they made me actually feel what the characters were feeling and you dont often get that in a fanfic. Very good job,
3 your new phan, merra
Phachel chapter 42 . 8/1/2019
Such a beautiful, amazing, interesting story, I'm so glad I read it, I think so far this is one of my favourites, facts and the research made it even better, you can't miss this! it's full of drama, action and love, wonderfully written 3
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