its a shame this was abandoned

methinks that harry is talking to the sorting hat

i think i like this better then the original, it paints tom as a much more human figure

Love it!

now that's epic.

5/5

Forgive me but, how dare you abandon a story this amazing it's an injustice to such a creative, imaginative, original and remarkable piece of fiction.

*breathes* Anyway, I really do enjoy the writing style of this story as it explains so much and yet it still has it's mysteries and keeps you wanting more. (I still wish to know the betrayal Harry experience at Hermione, Dumbledore, the Weasleys, etc.)

The story really does have a lot of potential and I feel it is setting the scene for what could be an absolutely incredible story - or possibly even a series.

I do hope you pick up this story again as it really is a credit to you. Do keep writing as I love being able to read your works.

I think that this story. . . it is just so real that it is sad, that if you think about it, this can all happen, it is happening now. . . we are pulling our selves to the seems, and we will leave our great-great-ext. grandchildren to clean it up. . . we are monsters aren't we?

well i digress, this is a good story, and to me personally a warning but again i am off topic, i can't wait to read more!

Shadow Weaver

Ehh... how emberressing, I hit the enter button too soon. As I meant to say, Demontors, how lovely. Very nice twist. I'll... just continue on my way, then... before I hit another button too soon... *Grin*

Ah, you have probably stopped writing on this... A pity, I very much enjoy it. It's been great fun to figure out who is talking in each chapter. And this chapter... Demo

This is fascinating. I've finally gotten around to reading chapters 5-15 of this story and I'm hopelessly intrigued. What did Hermione, Ron, the rest of the Weasleys and the Order do? How did Sirius return? So many questions... which just makes it better. This story has quite the air of mystery around it, and I absolutely love it.

The Harry/Luna is adorable - perfect, it seems, for the man and woman you have made them grow into. Absolutely wonderful that you have Trelawney cast in such a light - it would be quite a waste if JKR intends for there to be nothing more to her than meets the eye. I can certainly see Trelawney as a craft witch who has pulled the wool over everyone's eyes, including Dumbledore and (especially) McGonagall. And the DA is wonderful in its diversity - a castle, a phooenix, a hat, two twenty-somethings (I assume H/L aren't much older than that), two Marauders and Mad-Eye. What a group.:)

Thanks for writing this. :)

Cheers!

~*~LIZ

Brilliantly written, but extremely disheartening. The image of sweet, hesitant, brave Neville Longbottom as a Dark Lord is just horrible... and a family which could drive him to become a Dark Lord is, in my opinion, a family which deserves its fate. Holy crackerjacks...

Thanks for writing.

Cheers,

~*~LIZ

Wow. Poor Harry. I sincerely hope this isn't how his story ends...

Cheers,

~*~LIZ

Ooh, this one's brilliant too! I like, I like, I like!

Cheers,

~*~LIZ (again)

Woo-hoo! Ingenius, absolutely ingenius! That's PERFECT!

Okay, I'll calm down now. :)

Cheers,

~*~LIZ

Interesting! A bit hard to read in areas. Some chapters it took a while to work out whose point of view it was. Glad Remus didn't willingly betray him.