Funny, you got Ginny's name right in "Damsel"and wrong here in the sequel! It is GINEVRA not GINERVA.
Also, according to 'canon', Ginny's birthday is August 11

I can feel Ginny's insecurities here. I just love your Harry

I hate cho...

Fantastic "girl talk"! :) Every young girl should read this, and I'm glad that you had them stongly suggest the abstinence part of it! :)

Oh. WOW. WOW. WOW! (In case you were wondering, I read the unedited version on LJ. Awesome job!) :D

Powerful conversation! :)

Harry duplicated Ginny's knickers? Wow, he is a naughty boy! :) lol

I hope Cho learned her lesson - looked like the message came across crystal clear for her anyway! :)

I read the LJ version, and I didn't see anything there that I haven't read right here. Just saying, I think you're covered with the M rating, and wish you'd include all the good juicy details here as well. Nothing wrong with a "lemon" here and there, imo! ;)

I'm very glad that H/G have gotten over that first 'hurdle' so well! :D

Oh my, this is really getting to the juicy part now! Brilliant! :)

Loved the twins' "talk" with Harry & Ron...once they finally got Harry to stay in the room! :D LOL Hilarious!

That 'Observation Sphere' was a brilliant invention - a perfect way for them to spy on their boys snooping in their room for what they left out for them to find! :D

If Ginny is 15 years old, how would she be able to do magic outside of Hogwarts? Also, I find it hard to believe that Molly Weasley would allow her daughter to go alone to pick up Harry, via the Knight Bus or not. Other than that, I'm loving this 'storyverse' and can't wait to read more! (And can just imagine the dread felt by the Dursleys by Ginny's evil-sounding promise!) :)

Very cool development making Harry & his parents/Sirius be able to talk through the photo...and that they could tell the Dursleys what's what as well! :)

Ginny's name is Ginevra, not Ginerva. I think it was probably a typo here, since it was correct in the first story.

"Due shut up Vernon!" [Do]

I went to the firelight dot net site trying to find the un-edited version of this story, but unrelated searches came up. Is there another source?

A very nice story I am gettig ready to read the sequel. I noticed that this story is not marked complete just thought you should know.

I really like everything that you write. It's sweet and good, but still spicy. he only thing is that sometimes its hard to read what you've written because you don't separate the speaking sentences from the narration. Thats about it. Good work :)