Very unexpected. Finally Dudley's in to magic! wow. that's really cool! i liked this chapter alot!

Wow, Very good chapter well. I'm happy Dudley finally asked The Durselys about the wizard part.

I've been waiting for the Time Travel since this story began but to be completely honest, I don't understand how the story leads to this moment. What was the point of all the plot leading up to now?

It's really pleasing to see the Order members actively helping Harry prepare. What a refresher that McGonagall is the one to be teaching Harry how to become an Animagus.

Gosh, I'm a sucker for redeeming Dudley stories. What a refresher to see him standing up for Harry.

I love this story so far! I am sitting on the edge of my seat, and wishing that there was more to read. I’d like to see if James and Lilly figure any of it out? Update soon please!

How could McGonnagal punish students without any evidence. Just because there was a prank played doesn't mean James and Sirius did it. How can they sit back and accept punishment with no proof? The They would have argued with her just like Fred and George would have done. Your characterization of them is way off. In addition, one of my pet peeves about time travel stories when Harry goes to his father's time is that the marauders have a map that shows every person's name on it. So, "Harry Potter" would show up on the map. Did you that one through?

How is Professor Black any different from Umbridge? Not only is she unfair, but she students torturing each other. It's more like Hogwarts in Deathly Hallows when Snape was headmaster and the Carrow twins subjected students to torture. Why doesn't Dumbledore care about his students?

Ginny is the maid of honor? Doesn't Penelope have any friends of her own? On another note, are we supposed to like Ron and Hermione? She is horrible and can't understand why Harry wants anything thing to do with the Hermione you've created. Ron is a bit better.

Why did Harry get all of his gifts at Percy's wedding? That's not good form. It's incredibly rude to celebrate your events at someone else's party. Besides, Harry is too forgiving. His friends are crap friends. He can do much better.
In addition, metamorph is not something you can learn. It's like being a seer. Either you are one, or you aren't. The idea that Mrs. Figg is a witch and squib doesn't make sense. Why did Snape show up at her house?
There are so many huge plot holes that I'm really struggling with your story/Tt doesn't match the synopsis of the story.

nice update

nice chapter.

Isn’t this chapter just an edited version of a previous chapter? And it’s not even the edited version of Chapter 21.

interesting chapter.

I figure Ginny is a Death Eater, bewitching all the boys so she can get info and control them. She wanted the power of time travel, and who knows what other secrets she will get from spying.