Reviews for The Ocarina of Time
TheForthcomingStorm chapter 29 . 9/1/2019
super yes yes quick sir uh mmMm yesper doo i shall do the lickity split and asap yesireeee only ten more years okie dokie?
Fandomfanfan fan chapter 29 . 12/15/2018
lol i love how all these old stories say "oh next chapter soon dont worry i know it has been a long time since last chapter but this one will be quick i promise ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡)"
FandomFanFan Fan chapter 1 . 12/15/2018
Wow, 10 years since i was last on this fanfic. I feel old xD
Kitty chapter 29 . 8/23/2013
AWESOME! I've bee reading fanfictions about Link and Sheik (and everyone else) for a while (meaning say only bout 7 months) and this is the best by far! Can't wait for you to continue!
Midna2788 chapter 29 . 12/5/2009
Please update this story soon! This is the best OOT novelization I've ever read! You've done a great job creating a detailed world. I am anxious to see the fight with Volvagia (he's my favorite Zelda boss), so will you please update it soon?
Jetpack Sunrise chapter 22 . 9/30/2009
This is one of my favourite stories on , so... please continue it! The only experience I've had with the game is watching other people play it, but you've managed to create a detailed world, great characters and plot, brilliant action/puzzle-solving sequences and just about everything else. It really engaged my emotions at certain points, which is something not many stories do.

Sometimes there are paragraphs which are a little awkwardly written, or too detailed/not detailed enough, but that doesn't really matter when you consider the 300,0 words you've written so far.

I hope that this will be updated again one day, because it's been great.
xClutteredxChaosx chapter 1 . 2/14/2009
This is beautifully written. I'm currently editing the first chapter of my own OOT Time novelistaion and after scrolling through tons of badly written ones I finally found yours and it gave me hope lol!
mbrothers chapter 29 . 12/14/2008
Sorry I haven't reviewed every chapter, but I think this story is awesome! But, how long will it be before you update? Are you still alive? If you are, please don't take it offensivly. I think I speak for everyone when I say please update soon!
mbrothers chapter 7 . 5/28/2008
Well, it just keeps getting better.
mbrothers chapter 6 . 5/28/2008
Romantic...

Also, I have a question:

The dying man at the begginning of the story, that's Link's father, isn't it?
mbrothers chapter 5 . 5/28/2008
Wow...sad... anyways good job so far. You keep the fantaasy theme, but it dosen't have things that don't make since via doors and puzzles inthe deku tree.
mbrothers chapter 4 . 5/21/2008
Nice!
mbrothers chapter 3 . 5/21/2008
Cool! Nice intro to the next chapter!
mbrothers chapter 2 . 5/12/2008
Yeah! That'll teach Mido! Lousy little punk... Again, good job!
mbrothers chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
You know, when I originally read this, I didn't like it because it was so more complex then the game. But, because so many people like it, I decided to reread and I like it so far. I'm also going to write one review per chapter. So far, nice begginng.
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