Great little tale. Judging from the date of it, I am sure this is the last of it. Thank you.

I am very interested in this story. It makes sense that Darcy's neighbors would be a bit miffed. Some people just don't have a great public persona. And others undeservedly do think Wickham ! Thank you for a great story. I am enjoying it.

I find this story very interesting. It had never occured to me that Mr. Darcy's neighboors might have been offended by his personality. I wish you would continue this story. Poor Lizzy! She is in a difficult situation, but I'm sure her temper will get the best of her sooner or later!

please do continue with this story! I would like to know what happens at the picnic :D

Hello!

Is this story abandoned? It's a great start, and I'd love to see you continue with it. You have captured a way of writing that is quite similar to the Regency style, and that makes reading your story so much more satisfying than reading a story supposedly set in the Regency era but with modern language. Please contunue, even though it's been roughly two years since your last update! /Cestrel

Lovely beginning...I really like how you jump right into the ball scene instead of spending a dozen chapters on the furnishings and going-ons of Pemberly. Hope for an update soon!

please update! i like it so far!

great story... keep writing...

hello!

I think you're doing a great job, but try to keep elizabeth more... elizabethy? i.e. playful, less concerned with etiquette say... but i suppose it makes sense, considering this is her first time meeting these ppl..

oh well, it's good. update soon!

Great story so far! I can't wait to read more!

VERY good. Please update soon! :D

excellent

very nice

very lovely writing, you do hold true to Austen's characters and writing style, which is not easy to do. Please do update as often as you can, I am quite eager to see what happens next!

m intreguing! and poor lizzy! please continue.