Reviews for Black Wolf Deception |
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![]() ![]() This is my review for the entire fanfic. To start off, I honestly was surprised with your writing. I have skimmed though the CCS fanfics over the years in search of a 'gang-related' story, but my search came up empty and disappointing. The many that I did see, were short, confusing, ridden with terrible grammar and seemed so rushed; pointless. Black Wolf Deception was truly a pleasant find. I was shocked to find that it lasted for only chapters, but when I saw the progressing chapters get longer, I understood completely. I read your whole fanfic in one day (which is saying something - I have an extremely busy schedule). There were very few grammatical errors, the plot was impressive, and the progression of the story/characters were beautiful as well. I felt there were some things that can be improved upon, such as character progression of Takouya, Saola and Watanaki, or even the relationship between Meilin x Mika. A lot of things came to me as surprising, in the sense that it seemed rushed. But overall, great story you have here. You have proven to me that CCS fanfics still have hope! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the story! I love the ending! I really like the part when sakura warns syaoran she's about to faint! I am planning to re read this story! I'll pm my comments and questions! yingfa07 |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey, i have to say that i absolutely love this fic! Love it, love it, love it _ |
![]() ![]() OMG this was an amazing story and I couldn't stop reading it this should have more reviews. I loved how you made them act and the action. It was a great story and I can't wait 2 read more. keep writing you got the works and a gift. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I just love this fic! I really loved the ending! |
![]() ![]() i luv this story! ur a really good writer! keep on writing mores! ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg i luv this story great story! & moon girl i luv ur name too, it so romantic...and kawaii! |
![]() ![]() you have an amazing talent for writing. i hope you write another story real soon. |
![]() ![]() hey man, this is story is some pretty sweet stuff. very nice ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() your story rocks! you really can write.. |
![]() ![]() It's a very good story. Good work. You really should be an author someday. I bet your books would be world-wide best sellers. Keep up the good work, I'm rooting for you! |
![]() ![]() This has to be like the most underrated story I seriously enjoyed reading it. The going undercover in a gang plot might be common but the difference in your story is that your story is in detail and is more complex. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. this is such a well written story. i can't believe it's over. do u think it's possible to have a sequel? if u did it would be great. |
![]() ![]() This story is amazing! The storyline was so captivating, & I loved your portrayal of all the characters. Thanks for a great read - words can't describe how much I enjoyed your fic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love your story your really good at writing and you should keep writing good luck with other stories ...byez |