Reviews for Heroic Failure
bcbdrums chapter 4 . 2/17/2019
GREAT fic!
Daki92 chapter 4 . 10/1/2011
Heh, what a cute fanfic
snarky Beth chapter 4 . 7/10/2010
Aww, cute ending :) This was a really good story! There were twists all over the place and you found a really interesting way to bring back the whole 'Go Comet' concept. The idea of Drakken and Shego blackmailed into working for Global Justice is a fav of mine, and I really liked your spin on it!
MARINA chapter 4 . 8/14/2009
man a licke shego and team go togther again please make a story team go and shego togther again
MaggieLimerick chapter 4 . 9/8/2007
That was incredible! You did a wonderful job on this story. It was very well constructed and like I said before, Drakken and Shego are very much in character. As were all the other characters. It makes the story all the more like the show. I really enjoyed reading this. It kept me intrigued and I didn't want to quit reading it. Well to sum up everything I've written: I loved it!
MaggieLimerick chapter 1 . 9/8/2007
This is very creative. I love the little humorous bits also. They really add to the story. Drakken and Shego are also in character. I like that. Well good job on this chapter. I plan to finish reading this story now that I'm intrigued.
ehzxj29482 chapter 4 . 5/9/2007
Aw, this was so cute:D

The whole Hego thing was crazy weird. I actually didn't get it until the second Shego was all 'I know why you're doing this'. The exact second:D

Well, I cried. I'm a total crybaby when it comes to stories, but I was in all out tears when Shego was talking with Hego. Especially when Hego was talking about the Go Tower recognizing her glow. Man, that was so sad.

On the happy side, Kate was a total cutie. I was sniffling back, chapters ago, when Shego was whispering 'Please don't wish that'.

If only there could have been a win-win solution for this. What with her going back to her brothers and somehow reaching a compromise with Drakken. But she kinda did do that, didn't she? Only she didn't stay with her bro's. But it worked out.

Okay, you absolutely gotta post more KP stuff on Hopefully another tear-jerking Shego Team Go and maybe, just maybe toss in a lil KP action, too? Pretty-please with a cherry on top?

Lol, just kidding, but that would be awesome:D You are one of the best authors I've seen online so far. So talented:D

Keep writing -cough-KPstories-cough-

~Jelly Bean
Pyric chapter 7 . 3/14/2007
And there it is, the conclusion of a fine story.

Here is your rain check, in the form of an extended review of the entire fanfic:

While some things were fairly easy to predict/reason out, but there were enough minor twists to make up for it. A very cute fic, if I may say so (it is intended as a compliment) and well played. A number of amusing and humourous lines and not too much OOCness on the part of the characters. You came up with a good story and saw it through to completion - and you did it very well.

Good work :)
Pyric chapter 6 . 3/13/2007
Gah, if I didn't have to leave in a hurry - I'd leave you a heckuva good review.

Take a rain-check?
Pyric chapter 5 . 3/13/2007
The reason for Hego's trip to the dark side, that caught me by surprise. Good stuff.

And the sci-guy - nice twist! Gotta love surprises!
Pyric chapter 4 . 3/13/2007
Half-saw that coming - figured the thing Drakken was bringing with him was Shego, but I wasn't sure why. Interesting! Been toying with the power-source idea myself, government interest in people with superpowers is always an awesome plot.

So uh, cool.
Pyric chapter 3 . 3/13/2007
Heh, I knew it was Hego.

And uh, Bluego? Priceless. Good stuff. No to mention the Double-O D line from before, and the Drakken/Dementor verbal war. Oh man. Chuckles all around!
Pyric chapter 2 . 3/13/2007
Aww, nice. Little girl from past heroicism? Sweet.

This is looking very good - like the whole 'back to the roots' kind of thing. Plus it's Shego and Drakken - tons of room for humour and sarcastic wit!

Loving it.
Pyric chapter 1 . 3/13/2007
"See, Shego? I impressed someone."

"Yay you."

HA! Oh man, that was good. Nice!

Heh, so I was looking for Shego fanfics and I decided I'd work my way from the older ones through, since it seems to be that the earlier ones tend to be better, and who should I find but someone with the same name as the creator of my favourite Shego video, Good To Be Bad. Whether that's you or not doesn't really matter - it was reason enough to click on your name, and regardless, this is looking quite good. So yay! Go you for being awesome!
CastaS chapter 7 . 9/1/2006
great story, i love it
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