Reviews for Awakening |
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![]() ![]() GREAT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It took the threat of losing Amanda's affections to another man to cause Lee to admit he really cares for her as more than a colleague or friend. Dotty gave Amanda a great insight when she said both Lee and Amanda "light up" when they see each other. After much hither and thither, Lee bucked up his courage and went to her house bearing flowers, contrition and love. There, Lee kissed Amanda three times: properly, purposefully and passionately. That brought to my mind a line from Lewis Carroll's "The Hunting of the Snark" (1876): "What I tell you three times is true." Congratulations on weaving together a beautiful and intricate story that stayed true to our beloved characters. It's easy to imagine this as a two-part S&MK episode. A pity you wrote only two stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story |
![]() ![]() Great job! Very much in character. I enjoyed it very much. Thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() I realize that you wrote this a long time ago, but I did want to comment on how much I enjoyed reading this. You have Amanda and lee down! |
![]() ![]() That is one of the best SMK stories I have ever read! I liked the subplots and the recurring theme of "fear." You are a great writer! |
![]() ![]() Great story! I liked the way you made Doug the matchmaker, at least in getting Lee and Amanda to reveal their emotions to each other! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! This was so intense. The scenes between L & A were so passionate. I could feel their anger and frustration, and I feel that this added another dimension to their characters and relationship. Thanks for such a fiery, well-written romance! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH, this was great. I really enjoyed reading this! Great work! |
![]() ![]() I just got a chance to read this story. I absolutely loved it. Keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() Very entertaining story - Great job with the dialogue, even minor characters like Amanda's mom sound like they do on the show. |
![]() ![]() It was great! I just love good 'ol angst plots! . And it certainly gets better when our dear Lee is the jealous part, right? If you ask me, it was time that he realized how special Amanda is, and act upon it! |
![]() ![]() very good story |
![]() ![]() This is absolutely fantastic. Not only did you have a case that SO EASILY could have come directly from the show, but you had the remarkable story about Lee and Amanda's personal feelings intertwined...what a GREAT job! |
![]() ![]() Oh, I just loved this story! I got tears in my eyes on the "an entire field of them" line. Beautiful story! |