I've only just started reading this so far it's not to bad and I have some advice most people make up the names of the tailed beasts but it turns out that they already have them I know because I have read one of the mangas and that is what was in it. Although I only know the four tails and the nine tails since they were the only ones mentioned at the time. The four Tails is Son Goku and the nine tails is Kurama. Thought you might want to know.

Nice chapter, I can't wait to see how Shikamaru's group deals with Shukaku now and how Naruto's group fares against the Sand Warriors.

very good so far.

a very good story.

hm

[ how come u havnt updated?

After the first chapter of this, you had me hanging with suspence...

now you write this garbage? the maturity and thoughtfullness of this chapter has sunken to a 10 year old after he just watched the episode when the 3rd died and copied everything...

dissapointed thouroughly

great story line. please update soon

Great story, update soon!

what! Hinata is married to Sasuke? WTF? I'll keep on reading.

in the first chapter of ur story naruto seemed to be all bloody from his wounds, but when he met tsunade you mentioned nothing of her fear of blood. i just thought id mention that to you.

of course just make it soon!

I can't wait to find out what happens next.

please dont abondon or delete this fic can you tell me what you think of my fic please send a reply

Great story so far and I personally think Naruto and Gaara's respective demons should help them get through their caves and in naruto's case help find the demonic artifact. Please update soon. and I think akira should have the five tailed wolf/dog demon in him because five-tail controls five elements: fire, water, earth,wind, and lightning.

keep on typing and ill keep on reading