Please countinue this

Beautiful just soo Beautiful i honestly cried

AH Nice story \

So is Tyson dead or not? Hope he is not. But this was touchy. I nearly cried at Kai's instincts. But please let me know the answer to my question?

you should do a sequel

This was one of the saddest things I've ever read! Tyson (Takao) is one of my favourite characters from the series, and to see him portrayed in those memories...that nostalgia from Hiromi and Kai...so sad.

But I'm glad for the twist at the end. It made me so happy. I'd like to think that it was truly him, that he was alive. I don't think I could bare it if he wasn't.

Anyways, your writing...so beautiful, like poetry almost. You are a fantastic writer! You made this with so much emotion, and it definitely got to me.

Absolutely wonderful! :)

Review for "Last Christmas"

12:28pm GMT

Monday, 1 December 2008

Greetings, this is Glenn M. reviewing!

Very impressive! I have been reading a lot of romance-drama fanfics here, but I've seen only few of them written adeptly, as if a world-acclaimed writer made this! Very few other fics come close, if not parallel this amazing and classical masterpiece of yours.

The way the central characters are portrayed was breathtaking! To add to that, I was picturing in my mind how the scenes happened, especially when Kai broke down in frustration over Tyson's death, and Hilary restraining him, but to no avail! Everything in this fic is absolutely great! And for that, I give a two thumbs up and a double "Superb"!

Well, my review ends here. More power, and keep up the good work!

omg that story was so sad *starts cryin* was takao really ALIVE?I HAVE TO KNO IS TAKAO REALLY ALIVE! I LOVE THIS STORY! WRITE MORE!

*sniff* that was so sad. i almost cried...anyway, the very end, did what hilary envision really happen?

Gods, Tear ran down my face while I was reading this. I think you capture the sadness they are feeling perfectly. I love how you had Hiromi portray her feelings for Takao which she obviously has. I also love how you had Kai breakdown because every one knows he cares and bottling everything up would get the best of him sometime and I think you choose the perfect moment.

The star of hope was wonderful and the ending is a bit of an evil cliff hanger but Im glad that Takao is indeed alive.

Wonderful one shot!

Ja ne, Mezu

nice except that it's tragic:P

Is he really dead, I dunno, but what I do know is that there needs to be a sequel! I love the detail with Tyson's hair, it was funny, yet useful, you rock!

Oh my god! This story was so sad! I sat here reading it, whilst crying. That's the first story thats ever made me cry... I don't know if that's a good thing or not *sob* Oh you put the reader through so much in that story! When Hiromi had her illusion I got so happy, it thought it was real and then you practically crushed me when she was only dreaming! But now it may not just be a dream...

Ah gosh your such a GREAT writer its unbelievable! This story was amazing, I commend you once again! Hope you can update some of your other stories soon. I advertised "What you don't know can't hurt you" again for like the thrid time, and I'm so gutted that no ones reviewed it, even when some said they would... so I don't know if they are still in the process of reading it or what? I'm getting annoyed that people are to lazy to review great pieces of work such as your own. I hope someone will review *_*

All the best

- Wreckless Spirit -

This is an excellent story. It really tugged on my heartstrings when I read this. It almost made me cry! You have a real talent, and I hope you make a sequel.

Hey there! I know you've asked me to read some of your stories but guess what I have! I was reading this one thinking this seems familiar and then I realised I had read it before. I liked this fic the first time I read it. I didn't review because I am lazy and don't bother reviewing unless I am signed in which is like never and even them its rare.

It looks like your not a fan of yaoi and if so not majorly which is awesome. By the way i read your bio and would love to see some more salimaxrayxmariah fics. They are so sweet!