Reviews for Break His Crown |
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![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! I JUST FINISH READING YOUR STORY AND IM FUCKING CRYING!THIS IS SO BEUTIFUL AND SO FATASTIC AND OMG I CANT EVEN EXPRESS HOW AMAZING THIS STORY IS. I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS, AND FINISH IT. seriously there aro so many good stories too, that were nver finish that includ the pair Jack with Kim, that is THE only pair i competely ship) SOOO THANK YOU FOR THIS STORY, THANK YOU |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well this was a great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, Chase Young apears next? But then he doesn't go after Wu... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder what he is doing... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, lets see how this works. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, looks like that future could not be saved after all... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Metal uh? Interesting... |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, the dragon uh? I wonder how insane he got... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, this is gonna get tough... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, lets see what Jack does next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, this is even worse than when Omi froze himself to go to the future without understanding how time travelling worked. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, let's see how well this goes... |
![]() ![]() First of all... BEST FANFIC EVER! I love long chapters in fanfics, so I didn't mind. (however, you weren't kidding when you said that this chapter could be it's own fanfic *giggle*) Anyways I just wanted to say that the ending was kinda cute and the thing disappointing about it was the fact that it meant the fanfic was over. Well, thanks for the awesome fanfic! -sincerely, Apple P.S. it's weird to think that you finished this when I was five, don't know what year it is as you are reading this, oh well! ;D bye! |
![]() ![]() OH MY GOD |
![]() ![]() ![]() This storry was absolutely awesome I do truthfuly hope there is a continuation for this because I would like to see how Jack Spicer would react to actualy being on the reverse side of his bad guy idol Chase Young. |