Reviews for The trip
Violet Shadow Kurayami chapter 8 . 2/16/2008
AW PLEASE ADD MORE I LOVE IT SO FAR
sexysess chapter 8 . 12/31/2004
PLEASE UPDATE SOON OUR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN! (Screams evily and starts typing away)
Japanese Dreamer chapter 8 . 12/12/2004
FINISH THE STORY OR SUFFER UNDER MY CLAWS AND UNDER THE WRATH OF SEVEN HELLS! 'What is up with me and seven' -Shakes head- Anyway so far so good!UPDATE SOON PLEASE!k,Bye!

Kagome's girl
lileyith chapter 8 . 12/12/2004
Oh i don't mind if the chapters are short as long if you have alot of chapters!(great fic)-
lileyith chapter 7 . 12/12/2004
oh oh cliff hanger I can't wait to read the next chapter!(great fic)-
lileyith chapter 6 . 12/12/2004
wow! I love it! (great fic)-
lileyith chapter 5 . 12/12/2004
I like this chappie!(great fic)-
lileyith chapter 4 . 12/12/2004
*coolio!(great fic)-

*Cool
lileyith chapter 3 . 12/12/2004
wow great!(great fic)-
lileyith chapter 2 . 12/12/2004
I love this story! (great fic)-
Candy-Kisses chapter 7 . 12/11/2004
Hey yo that was awesome... u jus gotta add these-"- whenever someone talks. it gets confusing
blue sakuras chapter 1 . 12/11/2004
This plot seems rather interesting, but you might want to use "" and use more description instead of just focusing on the dialogue. You also might want to double check on the grammar and some of the sentence structures.

Keep up the good work!
sexysess chapter 7 . 12/11/2004
Here's a bit of advice NEVER LEAVE SOMEONE HANGING LIKE THAT!

But other than that your story was preety good.
Inu hanyou 33 chapter 7 . 12/11/2004
Okay i have a complaint these chapters are really short can u give me somthing longer
lileyith chapter 1 . 12/11/2004
wow I like it so far! I'm goiung to read the next chapter! (great fic)-
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