Reviews for Intermezzo |
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![]() ![]() Just wanted to let you know that this fic is really well-written and interesting. I'm someone who typically hates first person, but you're a very skilled writer, because I hardly even noticed, I was just absorbed by the story. I'm sad this one doesn't seem like it will be completed, but I'm happy I got to read what bit of it that does exist. |
![]() ![]() Well I super amazing magic enjoyed this fic...but I can not exclamate that because you seem to have given up on it, so saaad:( I know your still writing because I've read some more recent fics of yours so if you read this, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update this one! I don't even care if it follows the preview you left us with or if you take it somewhere comletely different! From someone who enjoys all your Yuya/Kyo fics and is sure they would enjoy others if they could get over this pair;p Thank you for your concideration in advance |
![]() ![]() ![]() You should update this! it's really good and i want to know what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very cool story. Please update soon! The're all in character very well and I haven't read a Fanfiction this well that was written after the anime or MANGA series. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really hope you don't give up on this story, or delete it. It's beautifully done. Instead of comparing the anime to the manga, you could view it as it's own story. It was inspired by the manga, but grew into it's own idea. Looking at it that way, the anime is actually pretty good. It's how I view it. I think it's a good direction to go. I hope this will help you find your muse. ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is this story ever going to be finished? It's amazing! Hopefully you haven't abandoned it, because, honestly, that would suck. I went to your homepage, but I don't kow how to navigate deviantart, so I couldn't see if you had a finished version there. Please update this soon! I've been looking for a well done Kyo/Yuya fic, and finally found it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Alas, abandoned! I was really enjoying the interactions here. I was also extremely impatient for Yuya to figure out that she was pregnant. And to see how Kyo would react to that. Thanks for the story so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha! Loved the end. I mean I enjoyed the whole chapter, but I ESPECIALLY liked the ending. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So I stumbled across your "I've Never," . . . and figured, hey, why not go check out "Intermezzo?" . . . So what do I find? One of the most well-written pieces on this site, so far! (Is that good English? I've been up all night and can't tell anymore . . .) At any rate, you've wormed your way up to my top ten. :) And yes. . . There are. . . More Kanashimii's in existence. . . Atashi no imouto ga . . . Oh yeah! I almost forgot! With all of her medical training, is Yuuya really THAT clueless about the signs and symptoms of pregnancy? Geez, girl! -slaps Yuuya |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! Totally awesome! I love the way you write and the way you keep all the characters in character! Please update! Me likey this story so much! |
![]() ![]() please,please,please update intermezzo. please, i'm dying. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I only just found this fic, but it is one of THE best SDK stories out there. Even if I read the manga and not the anime, I love it all the same. Hats up to your knowledge of japanese culture. Question: is Yuya pregnant? The whole feeling sick thing sort of hinted nd then that preview... Anyway, update soon, cause god knows we need more sdk fics like this one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() please finish this fic! it's so hard to find a good sdk fic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() can you please continue the story? pretty please |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would be so happy if you wrote more to this. For a few chapters, I have been thinking that Yuya is either pregnant or getting what Taka had. Love, Shinomori Kyo |