Reviews for Takarin |
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someone chapter 10 . 2/21/2006 nice fic! hope you update soon! _ |
TheVeiled Pianoist chapter 8 . 6/30/2005 um is it syaoran. I thin the nija is syaoran. yeah i think it is this is a sakura and syaoran fic right. k thanks you this is a kawaii chapter |
xSkull.CanDiiee.Bitesx chapter 8 . 6/28/2005 o...UPDATE ASAP! |
EightofSwords chapter 1 . 6/4/2005 Ooh, very suspenseful. I like this whole thign with people getting jumped (by something) after dark. Very intriguing premise. In addition, I always like stories where it is characters' kindness that gets them into trouble - like how Fujitaka's generosity in going to help Sonomi-san got him hurt. Call it sadistic, but it's enjoyable irony. Um - tryign to think of some way to improve the story, because I always feel bad if I don't give suggestions in reviews... maybe give a bit more character to the girls. Maybe you do this in later chapters (I've only read this first one so far!), but stories are always far more interestign and meaningful when the character has quirks that the reader can learn and recognize. Kind of like Tomoyo's obsession with filming Sakura. Can't wait to see some Syaoran! |
TheVeiled Pianoist chapter 7 . 4/13/2005 you better hurry or else your story will be reported k so hurry up cuz i'm not just made out of thearts ...LIES TO. HAHAHAHAHA YOUR REALLY HURRY |
Pinaygrrl chapter 7 . 3/26/2005 WOAH YES! LOL! CONTINUE! |
Anime Flower chapter 7 . 3/25/2005 i cant wait till sakura beats that ninja! GO SAKURA! oh and when will their group meet Syaoran and is meiling in this fic? are they the other group? cant wait till u update! _ |
xSkull.CanDiiee.Bitesx chapter 7 . 3/24/2005 Whoa...UPDATE ASAP! O.O |
xSkull.CanDiiee.Bitesx chapter 6 . 2/5/2005 WOW... That was realy cool! Update son! And is Syaoran in this story? And the girl that Eriol fell in love with is Tomoyo, isn't it? |
Pinaygrrl chapter 6 . 2/4/2005 YAY! COME ON CONTINUE! |
lil-cherry-wolf chapter 5 . 2/2/2005 Wa.. this story is full of adventure! Just as I like it! Is syoaran the tathran master? he... |
babystyle chapter 5 . 1/27/2005 hoi D i like this story too. its interestin'. these types of story intrigues me. teehee. ut i dont understand why after sunset? |
vysantha chapter 5 . 1/23/2005 Cool and writing and update soon! |
TheWriterChick89 chapter 5 . 1/22/2005 Yay! Me Likey! Update soon (like I should be doing _U) Aikou-chan (I'd write my quote here but you've heard it two times already _) |
TheWriterChick89 chapter 2 . 1/22/2005 HA! That's awesome - Sakura's rage is fueled by the ninja being a perv! This story's got good potential - keep it up! Aikou-chan "Man, today was a bad day ... the boss yelled at me three times, I got shit on by a bird and I didn't even get a voodoo doll." |