this was a good read

that is really cute that he is claiming her as a second daughter. I thinks its a great story idea

hah! she doesnt want to change anything but does want to travel along to watch tens of tousands of man die. yup real keeper this one

yes lets have a counsil before asking all that amaris knows nothing like a strategy made without information. its not like she can advice to kill sauroman before he creates the urk hai. nope nothing at all.
mary sue story my ass

you have a really weird writing style;
arwen smiles kindly at her and amaria understands why she is the evenstar of her people. ahe is incredibly beautiful and has a kind heart.
like ita writtwn from an observer pov, if you changed everything to past tense it would have been far better

what is it with ppl sending a normal women to lotr verse thinking she can make a difference. unless you can wield a sword you're about as usefull as a hobbit who cant carry the ring, in other words, not at all

This is an amazing story. You are a great writer. Please do another!

This is really great

I am in love with this story. You writing style is amazing and this story was great. I wish you would do another Legolas/oc and maybe a Haldir/oc one as well. Great job on this one!

This is well written. BUT, you were correct in your description. She is a Mary Sue. That’s fine and all, however, it is something I can’t get over. I’ll stop here, but I wanted to give my kudos on your story still. It’s well written. Great job

I loved this story! I have read many LOTR stories but this is one of my favorites!

Thank you for writing that story very well written

Hi there. I just want to say I love your stories and hope you update soon. Your stories are my favorite. Please keep up the awesome work. I do have a question. In the story New Life in Middle Earth the OC is named Amaris which is supposed to be named after the moon goddess.
So my question is, shouldn’t her name be spelled Artemis(after the Greek Goddess of the moon) instead of Amaris(pronounced Air-O-Miss).

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Did you realise that you started 8 sentences with the word "He" only in the first paragraph? Repetitive use of the same word for new sentences can become boring very quickly. Try to use a bit more variety.

Will help people be able to concentrete more on the content of what you wrote instead of counting repetitive words...

Again, please see this as constructive critism.