LOL!

If you had put every time somebody spoke as a separate paragraph, you could've made this seem a lot longer. I hope you continue this soon, but with much longer chapters! The end of this chapter was funny, though. :)

heh. sounds like a coote story! but i wish you can kinda organize ur story sho i can read hooz speaking after another. Im a lil slow..heh.

but coote!

Aww. That's so funny, but it's too short! Please continue, and write longer chapters! Yay.

I think you should add more. Maybe you should add other characters like Anzu and do some character bashing hehehe...

This is funny, and a good start but got a little too violent at the end. Your chapter maybe a little too short, plz update soon.

This is greatXD lol I cannot wait to read more

Ooh, I wonder who Kaiba's gonna be paired with? Kaiba romance is so interesting, 'cuz it's hard to do it effectively, ne?

That's gonna be funny, Kaiba skiing, with those long legs... I am gonna laugh when he falls over.