Aw, man. I was hoping there'd be more to it. You've definitely set up an interesting scenario, it just sucks that it's probably never going to get finished.

I love this; it's so sweet. Ghost and Nothing definitely needed more scenes together. After all, Ghost was the one Nothing went looking for to begin with. I thought it was very well written.

very nice fiction; i'm waiting for the 2nd chapter !

It's been years...no updates...too bad, really. I'd love to read the rest!

Very enticing! I hope you will post the next chapter! This looks like it'll be amazing!

Damn you, update! I've always wonderd about the twins... Cant say that I liked them much 'cause what they did to Arakdy was nasty, but still... Update!

Lost Souls was an awesome book and I cannot wait to see what you come up with by way of a sequel. This is an awesome start!

UPDATE NOW! YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT AT THIS! SO UPDATE!

glares

ther had BETTER BE MORE

yum

is this going to be slashy (steve/ghost)

i always thought that that was cannon specialy after they exchanged the i love you's

ps are you gay or gal?

you wtite like a guy

but the content matter seems like a girl

This is really good. I loved it. Please post more soon!

This was pretty well written, if not a bit dry. However, I would like you to expand a bit on it. I think that would fill up a lot of the holes.

cheers,

- Sarah Katherine

This is really good! please continue, I love Ghost! hehehe

I just finished Lost Souls and I started to look for some good fanfics and your caught my eye. I like where you going with this... I think you should continue it... I do hate cliffhangers... *sighs* Please update!

~Josh~

Great story! I wish that Brite would write a second Lost Souls novel... Please finish yours!

POST MORE NOW! I love Ghost and Steve and this seems like it's heading in an awesome direction, so POST MORE!