Amazing story

Amazing writer, amazing story. What else can I say? I'm ashamed I didn't read this sooner. ;-)

lol, I love you. Ryan angst is the best.

Such a great story so far! 3

EXCELLENT chapter. Very powerful.

This was a REALLY good story. It was very well written and the characters were true to "life", as much as can be said for a fictional show.

Even while the bad-boy-Ryan was different, it was still very much in character. I liked the journey, sometimes very difficult journey, depicted during his transformation and how he came to start depending on Sandy and Kirsten as parents, and even Seth as a brother.

I especially appreciated Dawn's characterization in her final scene in the final chapter. I could almost Daphne Ashbrook's (actress who played Dawn in the series) voice speaking as I read that scene.

I look forward to reading your other stories.

Thanks again for this story.

Man, this story was really awesome, through and through. It's amazing to see the transformation Ryan went through since the beginning. Makes me wish that maybe he was more of a bad boy on the actual show! The conversation between Dawn and Angie was really good, too. Great chapter, and great story!

Yet another good chapter :) I do think that maybe Caleb acted slightly out of character, but I think it was great otherwise :)

Great chapter, and I totally cried! I feel so bad for Ryan, but I totally know how you want to feel numb when you hurt. By the way, it's minor, but coffee is a bad thing to give someone when you don't want them to get dehydrated because the caffeine functions as a diuretic. If he were to drink coffee, he'd get even more dehydrated. The best thing he could drink is something like Gatorade because it replaces electrolytes.

Oh, God, I cried... :( Poor Ryan! Why'd you have to end on a cliffie...?

Wow, now even CALEB is pulling for Ryan? Great job in writing that and actually making it believable :)

Oh, no, I'm so sorry about your baby! My sympathies to you and your husband! I think this was another great chapter. I'm so glad that Judge Whitney let up on him a little.

Aw, so sweet to see that Ryan interpreted that as a hug :) *cries happily*

Man, poor Ryan! He's really fragile inside, but he's usually so good at hiding it... Great chappie!

Man, I actually feel really sorry for Dawn. Kirsten has a knack for getting people, though. I liked the last scene a LOT.