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UPDATE!

Hello Miss...I must say you do write well, but writing isn't all about the main picture. Rest assure these are no flames. I merely comment on other's people's stories, helping them to improve or praising them. I rather like the story myself, though the chapters were rather short. Not every one likes long or short chapters, so if you went into more detail about each scene, they would be a fair amount(don't bore them with details though, jazz them up). And please note that most people only read fanfictions w/ smut. And you said you don't write them yet, yes? well make sure you do practice...But all-in-all, a job well done!

Yours Faithly,

~*Lexie

P.S.

You chose your screen name from Elizabeth Bathory from stay alive, no? *smirks* Nice Choice!

Wow! This is good!

Update soon!

On mii favirites

Love xx

OMG this is so good! I'm on the edge of my seat! Please hury and update! Luv ya!

WHO!Aleera's dead,!

(UPDATE!)

Hooray! Aleera's dead!

Good, short chapter. make sure to update soon. good luck with school and schoolwork.

i like it but next time make it longer and update sooner

please continue i like this.

it is so good! :) please update again!

Another great update... :D Good luck with all that troubles you and gives a bugger of a time. You're doing a wonderful job with this story and I applaud you for finding time to update. I only wish I could say that I were able to as well. Thanks again for an amazing update.

Oh yeah!

Poor Anna!

Van Helsing really has some anger manegment problems in this chapter :P

-Naama-

WOW... both our heroes turning into monsters, anna is so confused, Van Helsing is in pain...and i'm at school reading this, when i'm supposed to be completing my work... anywho this beats working any day.

i like it alot... poor Anna...i would hate it alot if i became a vampire, and her poor family...in a strange and bizzare way i can sympathise with her.