wow I just noticed something after reading 7 chapters of this. This is some crazy shit. Like mindblowing. You have a crazy Iruka a messed up Naruto. Like I dont know how to describe this but I like it.

I love it. I noticed Naruto and Gaara are more different with each chapter, though. Ah, I remember the chapters when Naruto was much more playful... And I miss Haku. And what's up with Neji's asshole attitude?

Geez, what is it with you and yaoi? If EVERY guy in Konoha is gay, where is the next generation gonna come from... And now I'm too invested in the story to stop reading!

Did it ever occur to them to just show "the 10-year-old" Itachi a mirror?

OMG! This has been an absolutely amazing story. And I am incredibly impressed that you have maintained it after so many years. You do realize that the shear VOLUME of content you put into this story would easily equal a short story, or even a small novel? Anyway, thank you so much for continuing to work on it, you certainly have my admiration for sticking with it. Unlike so many authors whose stories are FAR shorter than this. I think they should be ashamed of themselves. Don't you?

Only criticism/critique I have for you is that you seem to consistently use 'rose' instead of 'raise(d)'.

I do have a couple of questions that I don't know if you actually planned on answering. The last time the two demon containers visited Konoha, they attacked. Ok now, to me it just seemed like a really random thing to do. And I haven't really been able to find anything in the subsequent chapters. So, could you please tell me if they had a purpose and what it was? Or was it just for the sheer chaos? Along the same lines, why Konohamaru? Naruto wouldn't have known who the boy was since the demons left at such a young age.

Otherwise, PLEASE keep up the good work!

What's the story of the red thread?

Lol the dolphin is psychic, psyco dolphin

i found "Heat" and HAD to chekc this out. and... wow. just... wow. i love it so much. and you're a very gifted writer. :3

WRITE MORE!

MUCH MORE!

I NEED YOUR WRITING IN MY LIFE, SO...

"BABY, BABY, PLEASE!"

(yes, that's from a song)

but seriously write more!

oh more please! I would grovel at your feet for some NaruGaara smuty lemon: pleasepleasepleaseplease

but...but WHY! Sasuke and Neji has been deceived! For a genius like Neji surely he can notice things aren't adding up.

FINALLY! some GaaNaru action! m mm m

why did they have to kill Konohamaru? are those demons the ones they set free because of the full moon, they mentioned in the earlier part?

wow, so it's been a year since Naruto spoke to the foxes when Haku died, or a year since the chunnin exams? and what the heck is wrong with Iruka?

It's so sad that Naruto and Gaara didn't have a childhood and had to grow up all evil like Itachi even if they don't know it... Still love the story and would love to read more! But could you add some more GaaNaru please? with a cherry on top of cream on top of brownies on top of strawberry jam on top of a hunk of chocolate?