AWESOME STORY! but at the end of the story, is that a preview for the continuation of this story? if so, have Sofia fight someone else instead of Rungo, I dont know, it just doesnt seem like a very exciting match, Runog is too boring, you should have her fight another stronger female fighter like Tracy or Rachael, I believe that it would be much more EXCITING! I think everyone would much rather see a cool character like Tracy come out and have a bigger role, but your story was awesome! one of the better toshinden fanfics i have ever read! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!