I like it, but sometimes, I realy do like Kakashi to become even taller than Minato was. I really wanted everyone to atleast acknowledg him. Yeah, good one. Keep up the nice work.

Loved jiraya's pov. He's still cynical but be cares

Hi I thought this was a fantastic story. I really enjoy your writings. Thank you

This hurts in so many different ways. Mostly over Kakashi's nonexistent childhood and the fact that he lives for the dead. The writing style suits this- detached, disembodied, not really belonging to the one it focuses on...Really loved this.

Why did you make me cry? Kakashi! I know the pairings of losing the people close to you too!

Very good.

So much emotion, it almost had me in tears. I feel horrible for both Kakashi and Jiraiya. They both lost people that were precious to them. Beautifully written story. Thank you for sharing it.

Wow, you are one amazing writer. I loved the bitterness, the angst, the pain, and above all the strength to persevere that overrode everything else. That bit about the scar and how Minato lives on in Kakashi was pure genius. Hats off to you!

poor kakashi. but it's kinda cool how you gave him the exact same scar in the exact same location as the yodaime did. nice little piece. thanks for sharing.

Wow... very bittersweet. I've got lump stuck in my throat now lol. Good job.

Gah! That made me cry; I hope you're happy!

Very emotional read- caught serious!Jiraya perfectly and young!Kakashi was dead-on as well.

:goes off to get tissues and sniffles:

Beautifully written und well thought through. Thanks!

That was an awesome story. It was really poignant.

It could be recent events, but a fanfic has never made me cry before. This was so beautiful. Thanks.

That was so cute!

I'm glad I read it.

:)