Reviews for SHINE
Guest chapter 1 . 9/23/2017
Amazing story and storyline even though I'm not done with it. I suppose you may be putting your own twist to it, but it just bothers me about the names! I couldn't finish the first page before I had to put this. I know it's already finshed, but I'm upset about the names. First off, the girls real name is Raven Roth. Second, I wasn't quite sure who you were referring to by 'Kori.' There is no Kori that I am aware of. Next, Wally's real name is Wallace, not Walter! His full name is Wallace Rudolph West in case you didn't know. I may post another comment later when I finish, but for now I am glad I got that off my chest-especially since Wally West is one of my favorite characters besides Robin! Anyway, good story. I would advise you to notify people that you changed names up, so you don't give false info about the DC universe. Thank you

-TheBoyWonder
coolgirl chapter 4 . 5/6/2017
i don't really like robrae but robstar is the coolest:-)
GrnDy13 chapter 17 . 8/4/2013
Please update soon! I love the story line and the way the characters are portrayed! Everything about this story is amazing. Please consider updating again soon!
Guest chapter 10 . 6/6/2013
Whats wrong with guys!
Ophelia'song chapter 17 . 5/1/2013
I really hope you finish this story i do enjoy reading it :)
discb chapter 17 . 12/26/2012
Hope that you do update, otherwise, it was fun.
Samian chapter 17 . 12/12/2012
Following just in case, aside from the occasional error in phrases this was quite good and a nice change in my normal reading.

Good work
13animegirl chapter 7 . 12/10/2012
ok really raven are you really that slow today
13animegirl chapter 6 . 12/10/2012
aw raven you love kid flash and robin loves you
13animegirl chapter 3 . 12/10/2012
oh snap
13animegirl chapter 2 . 12/10/2012
ey kid flash you dumped the prettiest coolest girl in the world
Misyel chapter 17 . 9/29/2012
Ahh, too bad..
I want to know the story though..
But I hope for the best even you don't updated it again..
Akren Alumni chapter 17 . 9/28/2012
great story so far please update
Abbie chapter 17 . 8/19/2012
Its it's so romantic :)
Stiffinme chapter 5 . 3/26/2012
Eww...I need a shower...a boiling-lobster hot shower...with a bleach-back body soap...to wash Terra taint off.
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