Reviews for SHINE |
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![]() ![]() Amazing story and storyline even though I'm not done with it. I suppose you may be putting your own twist to it, but it just bothers me about the names! I couldn't finish the first page before I had to put this. I know it's already finshed, but I'm upset about the names. First off, the girls real name is Raven Roth. Second, I wasn't quite sure who you were referring to by 'Kori.' There is no Kori that I am aware of. Next, Wally's real name is Wallace, not Walter! His full name is Wallace Rudolph West in case you didn't know. I may post another comment later when I finish, but for now I am glad I got that off my chest-especially since Wally West is one of my favorite characters besides Robin! Anyway, good story. I would advise you to notify people that you changed names up, so you don't give false info about the DC universe. Thank you -TheBoyWonder |
![]() ![]() i don't really like robrae but robstar is the coolest:-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update soon! I love the story line and the way the characters are portrayed! Everything about this story is amazing. Please consider updating again soon! |
![]() ![]() Whats wrong with guys! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really hope you finish this story i do enjoy reading it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope that you do update, otherwise, it was fun. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Following just in case, aside from the occasional error in phrases this was quite good and a nice change in my normal reading. Good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok really raven are you really that slow today |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw raven you love kid flash and robin loves you |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh snap |
![]() ![]() ![]() ey kid flash you dumped the prettiest coolest girl in the world |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh, too bad.. I want to know the story though.. But I hope for the best even you don't updated it again.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story so far please update |
![]() ![]() Its it's so romantic :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eww...I need a shower...a boiling-lobster hot shower...with a bleach-back body soap...to wash Terra taint off. |